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hgismylife379 chapter 5 . 11/30/2015 PLEASE UPDATE! What happened?! |
naruto girl 15 chapter 5 . 6/11/2013 I was going to favorite this story but then I saw it wasn't worth it , unfinished stories don't diserve favorites . All my favorite stories are unfinished , people should take more risponsibility with there stories otherwise it'll be like feeding a hungry person one day with the promise of coming back tomorrow and not doing so, it's just mean and I'm tiered of it. |
oddstick chapter 5 . 9/17/2007 I love AU and continuation stories in this fandom and yours does not disappoint! Great job, and I'm looking forward to more. |
cwby30 chapter 5 . 3/26/2007 Evenin'. Just happened upon your fanfic, and read through it. Saw you haven't had time to update since SEptember. Hope Cairo is what you expected and more. Which is what we would like to read, more! Hope you find the time and the right muse, maybe Jack talking to you in those early morning waking hours, to tell us more of your story. Good twist on the OS, with Jack taking advantage of someone else's death to fake his. Ennis and Jack need to work through things, but they should be able to find a ranch someplace where folks are more accomodating, even in 1983! Thanks. |
XRachX chapter 5 . 9/12/2006 Beautful, just beautiful. Good luck in Cairo. |
onefreetoroam chapter 5 . 9/11/2006 Thanks, it was worth the wait - just hope that the next chapters are a little quicker? I really like the idea of Jack finding a place and getting it. Think that would help a little especially if it's pretty isolated. |
Charles Devante chapter 5 . 9/11/2006 Excellent writing. I could feel their pain. Keep up the good work, looking forward to your next chapter. |
ShesMyCHerryPI chapter 4 . 8/13/2006 wow...lovely scene (lovely you were lookin red in the face the entire time you read it) NUH UH! (the3n why do you look like a tomato?) *blushing bright red*I got a sunburn! (really...now how can you get a sunburn in doors?) shut up! |
aliceathome chapter 4 . 7/20/2006 I loved this but want to know what happens next. Help! |
aussiejohn chapter 4 . 6/23/2006 Great story. Can't wait for the next update. |
IrishDrifter chapter 4 . 6/14/2006 I like it! Really! Very nice! Just promise you'll read my story, Two Twists. Tell me what you think review plz! |
tkelly03 chapter 4 . 6/11/2006 great...pleaes continue |
InspiringIvy87 chapter 4 . 5/23/2006 Hot! Really, I have nothing more constructive than that to say. Lol. I hope you can update soon! |
onefreetoroam chapter 4 . 5/22/2006 Hey, glad to see your back with us. Thanks for an interesting story and hope to see more soon. Oh, and wow, this could be used to ... well, you know. LOL. |
Hurley's Belial chapter 4 . 5/22/2006 As for the question about lube, in the first scene in the movie where Jack and Ennis have sex, there's a moment where it looks like Ennis spits on his hand or something...but I'm not sure. Anyway, I really like this fic! Please update! |