I must say, this was quite good. Even without epic battles, speeches or anything else of the sort, it was an extremely well written story. Got you thinking. What would happen if? It's th same basis for my own fic. Not everything has to be epic either.

Thanks for writing a great story and I'm glad I got to read it.

awesome story!

AW! What a sweet ending! Eyebright, you have crafted a lovely story! I like your Serena, she doesn't incredibly learn how to do well in school, the addition of the Princess doesn't make her all ethereal and one-dimensional. I hadn't read any Sailor Moon in awhile, but I think I'll have to check back in now. Well done, Li'l Albatross (great name, btw)!

omg, that was a great story! great plot and the parts with serenity...hope u write more!

HAHHA I LIKE IT!

I loved the ending! Positively amazing story!

I liked your story and some parts I liked very much. It was interesting too. The epilogue was great, I liked it very much also.

LOVED it! :0)

more?

:)

love how you put the shattered coffee cups into the end there! very clever!

Oh I LOVED that! How she restored Darien's memories... and his reaction... so romantic! :0) Nice ending note there too... the last line...

So glad you came back to finish this! what an awesome story you've written (am just rereading it - I still LOVE the meatballs seemed to droop line)

'tute hehe (cute) incase u didnt no lol

luv it!

I liked it. hope you do update

lovely! Update please!

Wow...good story so far. I can't wait to see how she acts around Darien now...oh and see how he acts considering he doesn't have his memories. I hope that you update soon. I really like this story so far. _

YAY! this was a good chapter! I hope you update soon and I cant wait to see what Luna and Artemis say when they find out! meatball head is a princess! hehehehe. i can see the looks on thier faces!