Oh god, that so cute and lovely. I love their freindships and love this story that so adorable. I just miss a kiss but it's not important.

im crying this is too cute. i will love this fic forever and ever

In the words of eric cartman: "ohmygahd sooo cuuuuute!"

Awesome that was just the story to end the night! Awwww I really enjoyed this a lot. It was sweet, cute, and uplifting. :) thanks for sharing this!

waow best choujixshika i've read ,good writter too

This is such a beautifully written piece :)... gosh, it made me cry now TwT'

oh that was sad! But the ending was LOVELY! ;D Good job...;D

Hey hey, some decent Chouji-perspective! I identify with his character more, but I always write for Shikamaru for some reason. I think it's because his character is a little more obvious and Chouji's is more subtle. It's a blast to see what can actually be done with him, and I really enjoyed the duality of his relationship with Shikamaru. :D

wow that was really cool i mean i think the idea of shikacho is a little wierd but still that was good!

Aw, this is so cute... I like this concept of them, this kind of reality to their feelings. It was very refreshing.

AWW! That was so cute...

You just made my day! :)

omgomg I don't normally like yaoi but this is good

I love both chouji and shikamaru x

amazing. this is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read and God bless you for writing it.

Damnit trying to think of something intellegent to write... but can only think... 'Aw'