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delete delete does not compute chapter 1 . 6/27/2006 Hi! Very nice to see everything spelled correctly, but I know that a bit more editing may be needed, my friend. If you'd like, I can edit it for you. (The only thing it really needs are commas in the right place, etcetera.) If it does get a bit more cleaned up, I'd like to add it to my C2 Community for the Zack Files and probably make you a staff member! A very promising start to a good story! Please continue? |
JLE chapter 1 . 1/4/2006 WRITE MORE ITS A GOOD STORY PUT CAM AND GWEN TOGETHER THEY ARE A REALLY GOOD COUPLE PLEASE PUT THEM TOGETHER WRITE MORE |
jake l epstien chapter 1 . 1/4/2006 this story if really cool please write more |