I LIKE YOUR STORY AND EVEN THOUGH THERE ARE SPELLING MISTAKES I STILL LIKE IT AND SPEAKING OF NEW CHARECTERS IN CASE OF GIRLS THERE'S SERENA FROM POKEMON XYZ WHICH IS THE 7TH GENERATION OF POKEMON AND LILLIE FROM SUN AND MOON THAT'S THE 8TH GENERATION OF POKEMON SERIES TRY AND WATCH THTHESE 2 SERIES IF YOU HAVE TIME BUDDY (BLACKHAMMER)

i love the kinda indirect sex refrences made me laugh my ass of

Awesome

Great job on the fanfic best I read in a long time ash x peach

You know such stories I really like to read. Everything was perfect in this story means you have the perfect vision you tied the knots of all the girls with just ash it was all that I like and everyone also likes the same you should make may and ash both girlfreind and boyfriend they will look the perfect couple and if you want then you could show them marrying. I would if you do that. Thank you very very much that you provided me such a good story

prepare for trouble, i feel bad for the twerp. and make it double, ash might end up hurt!

I luv ur stories they have very dramatic endings

me gusto tunovela me gusto mucho

Can you please add serena and also great story keep up the good work

that is dawn and WOW so many shippings YREKA you da bom

Am reading the next one now

OMG yes

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Idk let me read the next one

*sigh*