Meh, I think it'd make more sense to kill the doctor. As with all science fiction movies, many rich and powerful people would be after Sessomaru/ his blood if it meant an immortality elixir or antitoxin. And since he would be 500 years in the past, they'd use all of Kagome's info that her mom left when checking her in to find her family/ any connection to Sessomaru and use any means necessary to get his blood.

Mind blown! I loved it!

Hello I just finished reading your story. And it is really beautiful. You have talent. I have read so very many fanfictions hundreds of them. This here is unique and well written. Thank you for sharing.
love from Africa

si me gusto. pero me decepcione un poco con el final. kagome no acabó con seshomaru solo la uso para conseguir lo que queria y eso seria a rin. pero bueno espero leer otra historia donde llegen a algo. saludos.

Aww, such a sad ending, but still a great story. thanks so much )

That was A Beautiful Story. I Loved All of It.

That story was so adorable. I really enjoyed it a lot.
For a moment I thought it was going to be Sesshomaru/Kagome, and I am so so glad that it wasn't (no offense to those who love the pairing, I have actually read one really good story that was Sess/kag. I just felt like it would have been unrealistic in this particular story with the set-up we had been given). I was thinking that I could see like a mother/child bond considering what had happened in the previous story and since I doubt his own family was very nurturing. I believe what you showed was something different, but I don't know what to call it. That said, I did enjoy the bond that you showed between the two. It was well-written and well developed.
And I loved the slow development of Sesshomaru's feelings. Especially the fluffy Rin and Sesshomaru moments 3 I am a huge sucker for fluffy Rin and Sesshomaru moments. That he kept that doll made my eyes watery. The Tensaiga and Rin's doll were his two most prized possessions that he's kept for 500 years... *sniff*
I found myself strangely loving Kagome's mom of all people being the one to show Sesshomaru around the future (at least to start with) and I found his reactions to the strange future items as both fairly in character and hilarious.
I really enjoyed Sesshomaru's interactions with the doctor and I liked how much trouble he had with the bullet and how it made him unable to quite control his true emotions.
I was thinking that the young girl might have been a reincarnation of Rin, but I guess not *sad*. I guessed that the stranger was Sesshomaru right off the bat (but it was probably mainly hopeful wishing haha). I thought that the orderly was going to be a Jaken in disguise after we met the stranger and then I was expecting him to be the driver XD So I was pretty wrong on those fronts.
The whole future epilogue thing was pretty heart-wrenching *cry* but it was well written. I thoroughly enjoyed this whole story.
Thank you so much for writing it :)

Sesshomaru vs the bathroom - hysterical! I am loving this fic.

This was a wonderful story! It was so freakin' funny in some places, then the epilogue made me cry. Beautifully done!

I Love this story! It has everything a reader can ask for, drama, angst, tragedy, comedy and action! Very well written! Look forward to reading the sequel.

I teared up! DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD THAT IS?! If you can make me tear up it's like making a dolphin eat a wolf! Not impossible(I think) just hard to achieve! SERIOUSLY!
Your lucky I already stopped thinking of tears as a weakness that should be amended and erased or else I would've hunted you down and done some stuff!
Luckily I didnt cry I had I think I mightve probably hid in the closet for a day and wallowed in self-pity...

Awesome. I love how Kagome influenced him and I couldn't stop laughing throughout it. One thing is that I think I really need to start reading the genres. Now I want them to end up together but what the hay!

CUTENESS OVERLOAD!

Im not done yet but is it in his hair?!
I was right!

Yes! Uve actually kept him like in character for so long I have no idea how you've done it! I gave up with having him in character LONG AGO now he's however I want him to be!