I love it, while there was a whole bunch of small typos here and there, you really were able to captur Sam's good guy and hjeroic spirit

Excellent story honey, I finally managed to get around to reading it and it was well worth the wait lemme tell you.
Keep up the good work.

As a person who read The Final Fight, I am hjappy to see someone penned a happier alternative for those of us who are depressed by sad endings. Way to save Linka and Wheeler, and way to incorporate time travel with an innovative twist!

ok i'm hooked i NEED to know whats going to happen next! i loved the semi-"sliders" feel to it. you've got a great talent!

COOL STORY! THE IDEA OF A QUANTUM LEAP CROSSOVER IS FUNNY!

IT IS COOL THAT CAP IS IN THIS STORY. PLEASE WRITE MORE!

RODNEY SEXTON

What a fab idea! Most crossovers are frankly poo but I really liked this one. You managed to keep all the characters in character (except Linka never agreed to date Wheeler!).

The only thing wrong with it was that sometimes there wasn't quite enough detail. You skipped some bits that could have made your story more suspenseful. For example, when Wheeler/Sam and Linka are trying to get outside. This could have been a tense moment - will they make it? Will Sam be able to leap or will he be stuck here? Will the roof cave in on them? but it was over in one sentence.

But that's a small thing. The rest of it was pretty fab - great phrasing, entertaining and well worth reading. Well done!

Bex