shit i hate zack - read this shit only because hoped him being raped and burned

Loving this!

Wow, I love this story. Of course, the last update was three years ago so my request for a new chapter probably isn't going to happen, but I'd like to tell you anyway, good job! You should update!

Thanks for the good read.

Your fic is good. Your fic is very suspenseful. However, it is extremely confusing. I had a lot of trouble following our story. I can not clearly explain, but I will try. Between chapters, from the end of one chapter to the start of the next, this is where things start to become confusing. An example, chapters 28-30. You did not make it clear, if that was your intent, of the plan to save Kadaj. You made me believe that both cloud and Kadaj were entering a plane and leaving. Then in the later chapters when you mentioned cloud was still at the apartment threw me off. All that I ask is for you to be a little clearer in your writing. Perhaps be blunter; just throw a few statements into your story from time to time. Over all, the events, and the way you showed the brotherly love between cloud and the rest was beautiful. Despite my being confused, I highly enjoyed your fic.

Seriously. Best Story Ever.

Ello' there. I'm still hanging around hoping to see that you have picked this story back up sometime. But I can't blame you for dropping it for so long, I sorta did the same thing with my own story. I finally updated after more than a year. Whoops. Anyway, I hope you get back into the AC fandom soon. I'll be waiting.

This story is really great. I look forward to when you decide to continue your sequel. I'd love to know more about what Vincent taught Cloud about shooting and stuff.

Oh my god. That's all I can say.

I'm still in shock. I'll probably write a better review in like a week, but this was just so amazing.

Wow. Um, let's see. This is like, the best thing ever. (and sorry I'm only leaving one review for the whole thing! I'm lazy.

AW. But I *LIKED* Zack! Update soon, yeah? I can't wait to see what happens to Kadaj!

Err, forgot that only 30 chapters note, update with new story soon.

Wow. Awesome chapter! They caught Cloud and Zack made him a Turk. What will Cloud do know? How will he escape the Turks? Why exactly do they want Kadaj? Please update soon!

so much awesomness/I only wish that there were more CxK-moments but I liked this very much...will you continue this? there are still so many questions who need to be answered...I hope to see a sequel _

Wow, very nice. I really liked this chapter and the way you wrote the characters. Seeing that this story was updated really made my day. Up until now I was having a really bad day, thanks for updating. xD

Wow, this is really moving now! It's still as amazing as the first chapter, which is great, 'cause a lot of stories lose their 'shine' half way through! Once more, I love this!

Eric