Kudos for finishing this. The relationship between Kadaj, Yazoo, Loz and Cloud was very interesting though not really elaborated on. It kind felt superfluous since you didn't really do much with it, but perhaps that will come in a sequel?

The development between Vincent and Cloud was really quick. Like lightning quick, and I don't really get how it happened. But well, it was kind of sweet.

Very poetic at times. Loved it all. Thanks for sharing!

nice!

cute story?

Awe, this was such a sweet story. X3

I recently started placing these two together as a couple and I love it.

I am conflicted with pairings for Cloud, though. I think he looks good with Sephiroth, Leon, and Vincent. :sweat:

Maybe someday I'll be able to choose between them! XD

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy

love the plot.

I want it to b continued... ;(

This story was gut wrenchingly, heart stoppingly, and maddeningly beautiful. If you haven't figured it out, I absolutely love your writing! Can't wait to read another!

Oh wow, this is a good story. It was interesting from beginning to end and I had to read it all in one go. Great job on that.

Now on another note, there are a few 'word' mistakes. I think you might mean one word but accidentally typed another. They are here and there between the chapters, but they are not too great in numbers to inhibit the understanding of the sentences.

Also, some parts about Cloud's and his Brothers' past doesn't seem to add up, or rather, it didn't make any sense. Like the part about clones. There is a great potential there to develop some back story, it would be interesting.

All in all, this is a great story indeed. Thank you for finishing it.

I really loved your story, n_n please write more! D

IT WAS BEAUTIFUL! i cried when vincent wasnt there in chappy 4! -wipes tear- u get 5 tins of ur fave cookies and if u dont like cookies u get 5 bags or ur fave candy lolz and if u dont like candy...hmm idk what to put lol u get 5 random glomps! well i loved it!

aw this chappy is sad [[ but i still love the story

I did like this story. It wasn't cliche, and it had its twists, so it kept you reading.

Just a suggestion: maybe you should try adding some more detail and check on grammar before posting. That would make your writing even more awesome.

aw, I love it! It was soo good!

freakin amazin, your a good writer,keep it up! vincent and cloud are hot together and i like the way how vincent loved cloud like that, cute!

I'm speechless. It's so beautiful. You really caught me into it. Wow, really, I can't even give you a proper review it seems.

It's too bad there are hardly any good VincentxCloud fanfics, but you surely made one of a great piece! Keep on going like this and I'm sure this won't be the last time I'll read this. Great work *bows*