Ugh this was emotional! Great writing!

Oh dang. I really liked that little detail towards the end. It's not over at all, is it? Robin is still taking those pills, which means he's still open for Slade's suggestions... Then again, it shouldn't take Batman very long to notice that Robin is on medication, and he certainly wouldn't accept that.

Dude.. All I can say is that this story was freaking amazing. You did an astoundingly good job on this. The plot, fighting scenes, dialogue, characters, everything! Seriously, I LOVED reading this. Thank you so much for writing it.

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Nooooo ;( Too sad...

Wow that was rilly good I love it :-) omgz I wonder what will hapen next

wow i really like it :O

omg! i freakin LOVED the very end! having robin eat slades pills even after all he went through showed how messed up Robin really was, and the possibility of him still wanting to please Slade. Damn, make a sequel!

Oh my freaking gosh! If you were standing next to me right now, I would so give you a high five, a ginormous hug, and then beg for more fanfics lol. Seriously, this was very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it :)

I love how Batman was involved, but I hate that Robin left even though I understand why he did.

great story! i luv it! suspense, friendship and crime! Good Job! Now im going to read the sequel! Lol...

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You seem to be a really smart, creative, and talented writer with a wonderful imagination. You captured both Batman and Robin for who they are and what their thoughts would really be like perfectly and Batman's desire to make Slade pay for messing around with the son of the Bat and his overprotectiveness of Robin seemed to be perfectly in character for Batman. After all we all know that you do not mess around with Batman's son and think you can get away with it. Poor Robin but great father and son relationship between Batman and Robin. Great story!

great story with a good but somewhat sad ending

That is it! Kick Slade's butt Batman and show that fiend no mercy! Great chapter! I loved your story!

This is a great story! I loved how well you potrayed Raven in this chapter. You showed who she was and were in character with her her very well. She was smart, calm, collected, unemotional, serious, mature, and responsible, retained her dry wit and acid sense of humor as well as her annoyance for Beast Boy, and was not even intimidated by the Batman. Keep up the good work. Anyway I have one more chapter to read and I am dying to read it.