Very sweet and tender. You really feel for Hikari. Good job.

Shouldn't this story be marked as complete?

That whole story was just so sweet.

* chuckles *
~ Writers preference of conclusion.
(Expected.. but good! I liked it!)

You should continue tbe story with tenn years later hikari is dead and auska coms to comfert shinji

It was a very romantic story that i enjoyed and would hope that the author will alaborate on what happens in the following phase of their lives

Really nice story, short and sweet.

Liked the Asuka insert. Making love with Shinji and Hikari really did wonders for her personality.

You should probably mark this story as complete unless you're planning an epilogue.

Awesome story. To be honest I don't normaly rest stories like these but there are not many shinji and hikari stories. So I gave it a try.
I liked it.
When I read the authors note when you said you were going to put a part for asuka in. My first thoughts were are you going to add Rei in at some point But other then it not having a part with rei it was awesome. Keep up the good work.

Very nice story! Very nice ShinjiXHikari pairing.

A good story. Solid, kinky, funny.
Yepp!
Just a pity I discovered it so late.

This story made me go "Daaaw" and feel warm and fuzzy, and as such has been marked for destruction by my Legion of Doom.

These are the consiquences of making an evil overlord feel warm and fuzzy.

Utterly brilliant. In addition to the love making I like how this explores the thoughts and feelings of the characters, something many lemon fics don't do.

It's actually not the first time I read this but I felt the need to comment as it's a good read to come back to.

Again brilliant.

its a good ending but it was lacking the future view. EXAMPLE: the pair was married later with asuka and hikari's friends being bridesmaids. shinji had toji and kenske as his best emn and misato presided over the ceromony. 6 months later the pair welcomed a pair of beautiful twin girls into the world witch were name Ritsuko and Yui. 2 years later another pair of twins were welcomed into the world. a girl named Rei and a boy named Akira.

(then have a short scene acted out with the kids shinji hikari asuka and grandma misato. asukegodmother.

hmm...i would LOVE if you worked on a harem fanfic for evangelion!

Also,is it me,or do they never do fanfics with fem Kaworu?

That was a very sweet story, well written and WAFFY in a lemony way. The inclusion of Asuka gave the story a nice balance I felt, and if you ever consider a sequel I would definitely love to read it.

Simply brilliant stuff!

Ja.

Greenfang.