Good

It sucks

Uh.. No offense, but the Yankees play baseball. The Super Bowl is American football. And the Lakers are a basketball team...

Larry has no place anywhere. It's his thing. Wonderful story though not disappointed in the least but slightly output over raven wanting the baby and not even considering the fear of her father's influence..

That was Awesome! Please right another!

Ironically, Bushes by Hot Chelle Rae is playing while I'm reading this chapter... How fitting... Really great story (I know this was published years ago, I don't care. I'm reviewing anyways).

Alright, I can't read this. Not until you tell me that Beast Boy is going to get over it! SOON! I mean, really! Everytime that boy opens his mouth I want to punch him. I literally storm around the room, ranting insanely to myself. Thank god I'm always alone when I read fanfic.

Did his personality get a complete overhaul during the first two fics that you couldn't post? I just can't imagine Beast Boy acting like this! I mean, I understand he'd be angry about the Terra/Robin make-out session! I can even understand him being jealous (Especially since you've made Robin into a bit of a slut here). But where on Earth did he pick up that language? BAD BEASTBOY! I don't like it when he has a "dark" side. BB does NOT have a dark side. He may have a serious side, but it's not dark. He's not allowed to watch television anymore! It's a BAD influence...apparently.

I guess the only real issue I have, because I have no problem with him being angry and jealous and violent, is just the way he talks to Robin. I mean, it's so heartless. The next thing you know he's going to start suggesting Robin go fuck Slade somemore, seeing as how he's such a "manwhore". You just don't talk to people that have been raped that way. Everytime, I'm like, "Okay, Robin, it's okay to snap. You're allowed to attack BB!" Once this is all said and done, BB better get down on his fucking knees and apologize for being such a douche!

Alright, I'd better stop before this gets any more flamable. This isn't a flame, btw. I actually love your work, and I like this fic-BB's character, notwithstanding. I'm just really upset about him. Smallprint is actually my absolute fave fic in this fandom. There's no Sladin fic better out there! I like the psychological trauma in that one! It's so delicious! And totally could happen! I love how believable it is! But I think I'm gonna take a break from this, because I need to calm down! :D So hopefully, I can come back to it when I don't want to kill BB anymore! Hahaha might be a while.

Ooh, and I actually like Terra in this. I mean, I generally don't like her, cause I find her character design and personality kinda blah. Plus, I didn't like her taking Robin's place _ But you actually give her some nice depth. I'm actually hoping she doesn't "please" Slade like the seer has foretold and finds the guts to get out. Unlikely, but I hope so.

Seth is the Egyptian god of evil! I forgot to add Egyptian to Anubis!

Anubis is the god of death person I don't know? Do you read the Kane chronicles by Rick Riordan!

By the way it's Rae not ray!

heheheheheeeeeh... sooo no rubbing of the rhubarb for our bird boy here huh? heheheheeeh... well i hope he doesn't have to hold to that for too long, cause really us men can't go much longer than say... 3 possibly 4 weeks, without spanking the monkey, lol...

i doubt even priests or monks can accomplish this feat, i mean really! they really would have to be touched by God or the Divine or whatever to have the strength to NOT go on a date with Rosie Palm and her five sisters, for as long as they claim, to lol.. maybe even several Gods or Divines, *Grin* probably.

hmm that seer, is the great evil being the Azarathians or Azerothians or whatever their called, feared isn't she? heheheheheeheeeh

An Azerothian super villain, heheheheeh Azerothian super villains, hahahahahahaahaah!

Another awesome fic. Did NOT see the Robin-demon thing coming, although, moment you said it was an "indulgence" demon, knew pregnancy was headed their way. Again, love the characterization. BTW, I actually got upset when you killed off Jonathon. Liked him, he sounded like a nice guy, the kind you wouldn't mind having a drink with. Anyway, faving this as well.

ok So first off let me say how much I love your story, such a great idea and I love how you portray the characters. I can wait to keep reading and see what happens. I was wondering if you can help me out with something, so I'm halfway through the story when I realize that this is a sequel to another one of you stories and I am planning on reading it just want to finish this one first it's so good but I'm seeing something happened between Raven and Robin in the sexual sense and wondering if you can tell me what chapter in your other story it is so I can read it, to see how it happened

good combo...

BUT THE CAKE IS A LIE!