Reviews for Secret Affair
Lyra ze Hedgie chapter 22 . 9/29/2019
Wow, Sonic. I just knew you’d screw up in giving your babies good names. I had PERFECT names, like Angelica, Ariana, Savannah, Angela, Lily, Addison, Rosaline, Melissa, Dash, Flash, Thunder, Storm, Blur, Blossom, Anne, Amanda, Allie.
But, Gene and Aya?! What the fudge and carrots kind of names are those. They don’t even match!
Lyra ze Hedgie chapter 7 . 9/28/2019
Wait. Sonic has NIPPLES?! WOAH.

OUT OF THE FIFTY-THREE TIMES I READ THIS, I DID NOT SEE THAT,
Lyra ze Hedgie chapter 16 . 8/4/2019
Chickenshit? Nice word! I’ll use it!
Lyra ze Hedgie chapter 12 . 8/4/2019
FUCK YOU DR. EGGMAN, WHEN EVERYTHING IS FINALLY GETTING BETTER, YOU COME AND RUIN IT. GO CHOKE ON A PEANUT, OR DROWN IN THE PACIFIC OCEAN.
Lyra ze Hedgie chapter 8 . 8/3/2019
Every time someone has sex on something that isn’t there’s, they say “I AM BUUUURRRRRNNNNNING DEM”
Lyra ze Hedgie chapter 6 . 8/3/2019
Amy, stop it. You’re killing Sonic’s ego.
SonamySister567 chapter 23 . 5/8/2019
I would love to see this get continued, even if it’s just the last two chapters.
SonamySister567 chapter 9 . 5/5/2019
YASS! I LOVE JEALOUS SONIC!
5ilent Cat chapter 12 . 8/19/2018
I am a terrible person, when I started to read the story, due to the fact that you showed in a different fic, I knew there would be SHADAMY, I was interested in the moment, I knew everything that SonAmy would be, and I did not care because the SonAmy does not bother me , but as I went along and discovered the pregnancy, I did not have much desire to read, I was about to leave the reading, but that is something that my reader code forbids, in short, I decided to continue not only for this, if not, because stories like this are very hard to find, it's very good and I'm impressed by the way you write, ... however ... a part of me does not want a happy ending with Sonic and Amy .. I wished she would lose the baby ... terrible in me to want something like that, but I'm a reader and that's the way it is.
kimchi-tan chapter 23 . 4/24/2018
I know you're not active on this account anymore, but hopefully this review gets emailed to you since this fanfiction definitely deserves to see that "Completed" status it deserves.

This is one of the best SonAmy, or just plain Sonic, fanfiction in this site that it'd be such as shame if this never gets finished, especially since its going to be not updated for almost 5 years now, longer than the former hiatus.

I only started reading this some months ago and am rereading this again because this is that good. Also with little downtime as every paragraph give me intrigue. It's easy to see how much improvement the writing got through each succeeding chapter.

I know you're probably very busy taking care of your own family, but hopefully you'll be able to find time one day to complete this literary creation of yours.
C.B. Magique chapter 23 . 2/24/2018
It’s a pity this will never continue as I’ve noticed that your account has been inactive for a while but on the off chance you ever read this review just know that this story was really great. It started off like a regular drama but incorporated action elements from the series, which is exactly what I love to see the most. Even if the last two chapters never come, this is still a decent way to leave things and I, for one, am satisfied.
Guest chapter 23 . 9/1/2017
When is the next chapter?
Kyle XY chapter 23 . 2/11/2017
Hey, I know it's probably been at least 4 years since you last touched this but DAMN, this is a really good story! No seriously, I spent like a whole two days of my life that I'm never getting back that I would never ask for back if it meant never having read this, because WOW. The drama, the action, the romance, the dialogue, the understanding of how the characters are, even in a fictionalized older state.

I could go on and on, but the point is, this has to be one of the best SonAmy fan fictions I've ever read, maybe even one of the best Sonic ones, period. And there's still two more chapters left? And this last one came out in 2013? I, Just, I can't even, It, I, ARRRRGGGG, Please write more and finish this story, I'm DYING to see this thing conclude on a high note! 3

I don't read much fan fiction these days being in college, but the fact that I binged this within 2 days is enough of an indication of how great of a work you've done, and work this good deserves to be finished. I really want to go on praising every other aspect of your writing and understanding in this story, but at this point I feel like I'm overstuffing my comment, so I'll just bring it to a close.

Pretty Please finish this story, it would be so awesome to see it wrap up! I mean, if that drive is still there of course. I get that life has a tendency of getting in the way and forcing you to constantly keep temporarily pushing things back until it doesn't feel so "temporary" anymore. And who knows, maybe you have been busy but also have been touching up on this story a few months at a time whenever you can get the odd chance to, considering the patterns I noticed while reading. Regardless though, if the creativity, drive, and passion for it is still there, then I would highly encourage you to give this story the last few pushes it needs to wrap itself up in a satisfactory manner. And if after that you never wanted to touch a keyboard again, I don't think anybody would blame you, this has been a lot of work and I think everybody would be happy and free of regrets after finishing up something like that as a last fan project. Until the next idea strikes anyway.

Okay, sorry for making this so long, I'll stop now. Just think about what I said and see if you can do it if the mood strikes you. I hope I'll get to see this wonderful story completed one day. Till then, take care! 3
Rainbow Prime chapter 2 . 1/12/2017
The reasoning of the people who are angry at Sonic in this is ridiculous. Mostly because without him, they'd be dead several times over. Or enslaved., and then dead several times over. It's like if humanity turned against Superman for failing to save ONE person. Or humanity turning against the Avengers. Just ludicrous.
Gililoquy chapter 23 . 11/11/2016
Knowing that this is a really old story and you may not be able to read this. But here we go, this is an amazing story.
There had been a few moments where it did seem like the characters did act out of character: but of course, there were reasons behind these moments that made sense for this story.
But overral I would give this a 4.75/5 because goddamn I love this story. Hope you come back to finish the story, without no pressure of course.
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