A good story. Makes me want to appeaciate friendship more.

I really like the emotions portrayed in the fic. It's so real and relatable. Naru's POV came out especially well.

First, compliments to your Japanese usage. I didn't even notice. Second, this story was very moving. You did a wonderful job. I didn't notice anything that I was bothered with beyond personal thoughts. One of which, Naru hooked up with glasses boy, so I always thought they were a match made in heaven and that he would sustain her through anything like this. Mainly cause it seemed like she was used to being free on Fridays. Wouldn't she and Melvin/Umino (I can't believe I remember his name...) be together normally if that was the case? Also, this story really gives me hope as well. _ I had a friend way back when that I lost touch with over the years because 'we were changing'. Thank you for the hope you've given me. It was an inspiring story.

I've always d how Usagi ended up forgetting about Naru- how she abandoned her for her new life whether she intended to or not. I just could never forgive her for it. I suppose thats why I love this so much, even though I cant help but feel that Usagi will end up ditching Naru's and her Lunch date when something else comes up like always.

opps did her name wrong gomen! my bad sorry*nervous chuckle* heh heh?

you know i always feel bad for nara(the fics i've been reading almost made me cry) because usagi is her best friend then she gets new friends and then we don't see her much(in the manga anyway, the anime still had her doing a bit) and it's sad i mean think of how you must feel when your BFF of 15 years suddenly gets new friends and doesn't seem to care at all about you anymore poor poor nara

... :'( ... IS SAD! I'll admit, I cried. Maybe I was just completely hormonal right then, but it was so poignant. The Naru/Usagi relationship, rather lack thereof, always saddened me. I mean, come on, they'd been best friends all through school, and then Usagi becomes Sailor Moon, and what happens to Naru! And poor Naru, to watch her friend change and not be able to *be* there for her! This was really well written. Good job!

...Perfect. I cried... and "felt" everything

Ahh such a refreshing fic! The very question of the relationship between Usagi and Naru had crossed my mind more than once and it's so good to see someone has taken a stab (and a really good one) at it. The awkward feeling of seeing someone you used to be so close with was represented really well. And yes, of course there would be hurt feelings and uncertainty and those were captured nicely as well. At the end of it all, there's still hope. Although, I really got the feeling that it's almost *too late* for them. Too much has happened independently of each other. But still, there is that hope that they could be as they once were. Anyway, yes, nice job :x

This was one of the most beautiful stories I've read in a long time. Thank you for writing it

Interesting peice. I really enjoyed the realism in this story. It was a wonderful look into BOTH girl's mindset and their reactions were perfect! GREAT JOB! I know it was not your intent because the length, pace, and ending of this story are all PERFECT (and from an author's view it's annoying to hear from other people) but I really think you could conjure up a bigger story with this. It would be awesome to see how the other senshi would react to Usagi's attempts to pick up her friendship with Naru and the difficulties involved in keeping both sides happy. I see endless possibilities with your depth of character understanding. But - again - I know how annoying it is to hear that. And the most important thing to say right now is how much I enjoyed this story and it's message. "Don't forget the friends who mean so much to you, no matter how your life changes."

I love it! After the first season, we never really saw Naru/Molly again. She just faded into the background. Not many writers actually touch on that subject, and you did it wonderfully.

sigh...its so hard to find Naru centered on making one. Too bad its a one-shotter.

Yes it is quite good

nice too see someone writing about secondary charachters.

please keep doing so.