That's a nice little story. It's nice to see any Skies of Arcadia fic, especially a good one! The world needs more Skies of Arcadia stories, considering there's so much that could be written about. Anyway, good job!

I swear...I'm getting this strange feeling that I've seen this here quite a long time ago...Did this perhaps get deleted and just put it up again?

Anyway, this fic gives a very nice look at Lawrence's character. You portrayed him just as I imagined him to be.

I think this piece added a greater depth to Lawrence's character. I know he's just a minor character but I think if one pays enouth attention to the small details of of the game there is a lot to work with, such as you just done. This is great, its hard to find good stories in this section.

That was cute. ) It's going in my favorites. Also, it appears that you're the maintainer of fanfic_wishlist. Hi from a member of that comm. D

I'm glad someone took note of the "background" of the game. _ For example, I saw Lawrence leaning next to a guitar (it's there - go check), so every time I see it, I expect him to whip it out and start playing some hot-blooded Spanish music. XD Hahaha

Anyway, this was pretty good. _ Hehehe, Lawrence is so irked. XD

Aww, that's a cute story. Good job