cute and hot... Rolled into one...

Hehe... *big yaoi fan girl eyes sparkle* beauty loves...

Lol awesome job it could have been done any better!

Errrrr... That's it?
Well okay, it's pretty cute i think. But i just can't get the line of the story.. Kind a too fast. But after all i love the kiss part hhehe so cute i guess :)

Warren and Will are a great couple.
The story was really cute. And the thing with the photo was cute
I like it :)
XxZessxX

You should really continue this it was great, so cute. I love Warren/Will

what the hell?

that's not worth an M rating!

where's the sex?

a kiss? thats all i get?

a fucking kiss?

awesome i love this fic

This story is great! Unfortunately, I can't seem to find the unedited version. Could you send it to me or something? Again, great story!

;)

"The sweats were a little big on Warren. They were held up, only by the swell of butt and crotch. They hung low enough on his hips that you could see the beginning of pubes. " TMI! Coulda just said they hung low on his hips, hahaha! Instead of sexy, that was comical and pulled you out of the story a little. but otherwise it's alright.

This was a really steamy fic. Yum, Warren and Will and even more so when the former is only wearing sweatpants. That was really romantic with the whole walking and playing in the school leading to a really nice groping scene. The ending felt a little rushed, but otherwise, it was an overall enjoyable read.

That wasn't really frottage, all we got to read about was the feeling each others arousal then the next thing we know the're cleaning up. There was no action there. As such you should also really consider changing the rating, this was not an M-rated fic. All that happened was a little making out.

I totally Love it... It is the best Ive read in a while about warren and will.

Adorable story you wrote! It's very cute and just right for the fluffy mood I was in! I like your style and hope to see more of you soon!

-Kaoru-kun

Sweet, funny, sexy, and moms are just devious.

LOVE IT!