| Reviews for Sapphires, Rubies, and The Complete Picture |
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  AG chapter 4 . 12/18/2007 This is a rather old fic I guess, but I read it just in time for this year's Christmas! (I was surprised when I clicked in, didn't know it was going to be a Christmas fic.) Anyway, I love your use of words and the way you told the story, though there were quite a few typos here and there. I'm just concerned that Cloud seems too out of character, especially towards the end. Can't really imagine him hugging Tifa all the time... I think Tifa was very in character, you really bringed out her moody side. When I was reading it bothered me a bit that whatever Cloud thought about all lead back to Tifa, this may be the fact that I'm not really a CloTi fan (but read your story anyway because I love you writing!) but, Tifa is important to him, but I don't think she would be everything to him. Like, I found it weird that he only wanted to buy gifts for Tifa, unless the gifts for Denzel and Marlene Tifa was wrapping in the beginning was from both Tifa and Cloud (which is what I tried to convince myself to believe while reading.) Anyway I guess I just want to say, it was a cute little story, with a plot perhaps too linear and predictable, but perfect for a little heart-warming Christmas story. Merry Christmas to you this year as well! |
| justin chapter 4 . 4/16/2007 i really like this it is so sweet |
| Lacus Lockheart chapter 4 . 11/23/2006 Finally! I can review on this fic. I loved it, hehe. CLoud's adorable... |
 Kkim19 chapter 1 . 7/8/2006 oh, that's so sweet! cloud definitely needs to get tifa those diamonds and stuff. they were so meant for each other! ~kk |
| ShadowligerV chapter 4 . 5/4/2006 Great fic. It is one of the better ones i have read and if you are woundering i have been reading other fics and just barly got to FF fics. |
| Aries Strife chapter 1 . 4/22/2006 Okay now, this is for the entire story- don't know how late I might be with it- but anyway I love this, it's so cute, but I think you might have mad Tifa a bit too dependant on Cloud. |
| yellowchocobo chapter 2 . 3/23/2006 kawaii! |
| GeneralDragon chapter 4 . 2/17/2006 Wonderful story and very original at that. Keep up the good work, and i'll keep on reading. |
| dreaming.sapphire chapter 4 . 1/28/2006 Aww! That was so cute! |
| KittyHug chapter 4 . 1/27/2006 *laugh*That was too cute. Poor Cloud! Dealing w/ those dirty kids and not getting paid. I would have killed that manager. Anyway, great story!_ |
| KairiGirl chapter 4 . 1/27/2006 I never expected anything like that to happen in that chapter, it was so well put, I loved it! |
| RedHornet chapter 4 . 1/27/2006 I was laughing my head off when Cloud still in his Santa costume, hugged Tifa...Great fanfic... |
| Just Mystical chapter 4 . 1/27/2006 Finally! You have no idea how long I've been waiting for this chapter! Great job! I can feel the CloTiness! So thank you for such a great read. And I hope you do well in your exams and all! Take care |
| purple curiouser chapter 3 . 1/11/2006 damn! this story's got me hooked..i was groaning when i finished reading the third chapter..its wel1 written and has the um..tifa/cloud feel to it..it doesn't feel oc. -anyways- stop rumbling. i'm adding this to my favorites and i hope you update soon x) |
| locked hart chapter 3 . 1/10/2006 Oh no . . . Poor Tifa. What a big misunderstanding. :( Im sad now. & I feel bad for Cloud as well. What a mess. Anyway, please update when you can. I really like this fic. |
