That was the best seris of a ship I have ever read 100/100

I give this story 10/10 because the story has plot and nice graphics but nit the point it gets weird.

TBC? It's been 5 years! Are you ever going to update or did you forget all about this fanfiction? ;-;

ITS BEEN 5 YEARS, DO JOT GIVE UP ON THIS FIC. PLEASE

Roy must not die!

If you kill Mustang, I will find where you live.

I AM NOT SURE IF I ALREADY REVIEWED BUT IF I DID...IM A SORRY LOSER BECAUSE I CANT

PLEASE KEEP UPDATING...OR IM GOING TO START CRYING RIGHT NOW. ]]

I LOVE YOUR CHAPPIE...KEEP ON OKAY!

YOU BETTER OR I WILL TRACK YOU DOWN PERSONALLY...LMAO.

BYE AND GOOD LUCK! D

I LOVE IT.

LOL ]]

KEEP IT UP.

that was very good and i cant wait to read the rest

wow. that was intense... but I wonder what is going to happen to Roy... and ed. Oh well continue soon~

I love the story! please update soon! if you are going to update...

D poor Roy and ed! lol im glad hes not gonna die though! * big smile*

Amazing chapter! It was really suspenseful, and it was heartbreaking to see Riza break down like that!

There were a few spelling errors, so if you have time to correct them, I suggest you do that, but they weren't terrible and didn't remove me from the story at all.

No doubt it was making headlines now.- Hawkeye thought.

I don't think it's necessary to put "Hawkeye thought" after that, since it's italicized and in between dashes.

He’d never seen the Sin move!

I didn't understand this line. Did you accidently leabe out some words? Was it supposed to say"He'd never seen the Sin move like that!", or something to that effect?

Please don't take offense at this. I really loved this chapter(It's one of my favorites). Take your time updating, and I hope you can get through this tough time in your life. Thanks for an amazing chapter, and sorry for the enormous review!

DUN KILL ROY! XD lol good update though

Squee! yay! I love this story and I'm glad you updated! Okay, I have a couple of questions. 1. Does Envy want Ed for himself, or just because he wants to torture him? 2. The very bottom of your chapter says Copleted: 12/23/07, does this mean there will be no more chapters? .