Over all the story is ok. I can't quite place it but somin tis just missin from it...But I would DEFINATELY want you to WRITE MORE! I wanna know what happens!

OK - I was pissed when I got to the end of chapter 15 - and left hanging! Any chance of an update? - it seems to have been a while!

keep it comin, i'm hooked on this story, its getting better and better!

Hey, really good story! I hope you update soon!

MORE PLEASE!

Personally, I loved that story. It's one of the best fanfics I have ever read in my intire life. Better than some books even! Please, please update I am dying here!

Ack! I went to push the little contiue button at the bottom of the page and it wasn't there. Now what am I supposed to do? I wanna know what happens! gr. I don't suppose your one of those authors who takes bribes?

hee hee. Anyways, I love this story. Dreamseeker is an awsome character worthy of marvel. And this is such a great plot. Kinda the classic rescue story but with enough unique twists to keep the reader on the edge of their seat.

Of course, if the reader is anything like me, they just fell off the edge of their seat and onto the floor when they realized you left the story hanging there.

Sigh.

Write more soon please!

Wai! I just read what you have so far today, and I love it! I've always wanted to do a Marie/Logan fic, but it seems that you've beat me to the punch (by a few years at that), and I congratulate you for getting this far! I hope that you will not stop the story anytime soon, or if you do, write a sequel, because it is so well written and good! Bai bai!

PLEASE FINISH! This is a great story and you are a great writer. update soon!

This story is brilliant. It has me gripped. The writing is really good and there are no grammar errors or glaring spelling mistakes that usually pisses me off. Keep writing and please update soon.

To Heya:

"She is strapped down to the table by metal clamps on her wrists, ankles and even around her neck. She can’t move and it’s hard to breathe. There was no use struggling against the bonds. Her captors had made quite sure that escape was impossible. The bonds were made of adamantium. An indestructible metal."

This was an exerpt from the 1st chapter. If I didn't make it clear enough, i'm sorry! :0) Thanks for reading the story!

So far I love this story. But I gotta run. I will definatly be back to read the reast of this though.

PS. It is not slow! It's great.

one question: how was she held down? the only metal was maybe dogtags. just wondering

Oh so cool! I'm out of time now, but I'm gonna have to come back and read the rest! Got me hooked!

please update! I love this fic, I'd like 2 c what happens xoxoxox