Found this over on MediaMiner, it was reviewed in the "featured" fanfics section! But I couldn't figure out how to review over there since I have not used the site often yet. Just wanted to say this was the best one-shot I have read in a long, long time!

You know you probably ought to enable the anonymous reviews. A lot of people don't have accounts or don't feel like signing in, but would still leave reviews.

Anyway...you trickster! Here you had me thinking all the time that it was Vash when it was really Knives. Of course, I'm sure that was your intention. Very nicely done!

Ah yes. I remember this one.

It beat me. -_-

But I'm not bitter no. Of course not. Not me.

:: kicks the shit out of the wall ::

Anyway, I do like it.

As always it's well written, and witty in it's own way.

I'm not entirley sure though if Knives wouuls act that way, but of course, he'd have to have a major personality change to be out doing this sort of thing.

The comment about the people that big neading support was very good, and it made made the whole thing sort of anti-climatic, but it was still good.

As well as him staying true to the name "one shot" by firing that essentialy pointless shot at the very end.

Oh, and the imitation of he first time we see Vash draw his gun in the anime was a nice touch as well.

However, I couldn't spot anything that should be fixed, ro anything that I could actually say anything negative about so.. I guess that's it.

Makokam out.