Oh, I loved this fanfic so much. I loved the writing style, the plot was really suspensful as well, and the characters were amazingly done, especially Muraki, this was probably the best handling of him I've seen. The ending was a masterpiece, with Muraki's origin,Tsuzuki's past. Anyway thank you so much for putting out this astonishing work!

Wait wait what. Muraki is Tsuzuki’s biological… I can’t even imagine it. Then all that time… Wow. You really blew my mind with this chapter. It all makes sense, but damn, that makes some of Muraki’s behavior disturbing. But then, he didn’t know during his appearances in the manga, if he found out for sure when he was recovering from Kyoto.

Oh. So, i wasn't quite right in my theory about Jun. He does care about Hiragawa, just not in the way i thought.

Aah– Jun had feelings for Hiragawa. That’s why he was pissy about “everyone” thinking Fujisawa was so cool, and why he’s the one who cares most that Hiragawa is dead. That’s sad.
I laughed at Tsuzuki wanting Hisoka to read him. Of course Tsuzuki would be thinking of room service! He’s adorable.

And that's the wrap... on to the sequel...

What a chilly, exhilarating scene between Muraki and Tsuzuki… the doctor is a suave as always… Though Hisoka and Fujisawa’s scene is just as good. But seriously, a twisted ankle? Now, of all times, Hisoka? Ugh. You spoiled the chase… though I suppose it wasn’t your fault that you were running right into a trap…

Lol, poor little shinigami… and the rest… it rhymes!

Overall, this chapter really explains what had been going on. And the angst-everywhere really makes it so delicious to gobble up.

I still find it creepy that Jun called Hisoka Saki… that’s why I’m so glad Hisoka finally put his foot down and stop it. And awwww…. Sweet nostalgic moments… I’m sucker for those

Idiotic!Hisoka… he should’ve listened to Tsuzuki and stay together… but I guess his heart won against his common sense this time…

Evil cliffhanger, though

‘Reinvent the wheel?’ what does that mean?

Eeeew… pedo-scene between Fujisawa and Kiyoko? I didn’t really enjoy that… Somehow… Though It was refreshing to see more of a substantial background behind an OC… It was always interesting to know about… Kiyoko is a refreshing and interesting character.

Aww… doubtful!Tsuzuki shouldn’t need to worry… Soka-chan just loooooves youuuu~~ Though I’m feeling positively murderous for Muraki to dump tea on him like what… and a little for Tsuzuki for turning him off... though I know it’s Hisoka’s own fault… but still… I’m Team Hisoka all the way

Yum… spaghetti… it doesn’t only remind dear Tsuzuki, but me as well that I hadn’t had dinner… I admire Watari and Tatsumi (though obviously nowhere near the level of adoration I have for Tsuzuki, and especially Hisoka). Muraki is also the perfect villain, like you said, he’s very crazy and very brilliant… made for a formidable, cute opponent. Though, idk if Tsuzuki actually read, much less stuff like Holmes… then again, your Tsuzuki is far more knowledgable than the other’s version of idiotic Tsuzuki… I kinda love it

Another confession… when I first read your story, I didn’t make the connection between Jun and his police father until this chapter.

Okay, so I was half-right on the whole Mitani-Fujisawa thing... I just confused their characters (yay I'm not going senile)

I love this last part, where Tsuzuki showed that he's getting better on the whole guilt thing... especially the words 'loved having Hisoka' (I'm being a total fangirl here and taking only the words I deem necessary in order to satisfy my daily Tsusoka dose)

MurakixFujisawa... hmm... I kinda feel pity for the boy, because obviously the good doctor is only using him... and he's on a time limit as well...

Okay, Mitani is a far cry from Fujisawa... (is that even spelled right?)

I gotta admit when I looked up this story again, I was surprised that it had only 8 chapters, because I seem to remember it being quite a long, complicated story... Reading this second chapter, I can see why It was so long, with many interlocking events...

Am I right to say that the gold doily (is that spelled right? I have no idea what a doily is... I don't come from an english-speaking country) signifies the Sacred Heart?

Cute jealous Hisoka I'm a Tsusoka fan, just letting you know

Okay, I remember this story now If I remember correctly, that creepy boy was someone from that Catholic School in the manga (I suck at names, sorry, maybe it's Mitani or something?)

What a nice, creepy, gory, exciting begining! It promises trouble...

Fantastic. What a pleasure to read a quality work in the Yami no Matsuei fandom nowadays. I look forward to reading the sequel. Please keep up the great work.

(Screeches) You have to finish this story! Please

Keep writing,

~Winnie

I loved it!

But...is there going to be a sequel? It looks like there were several loose ends at the end of the fic. ;