dude it was great

aww, so cute

Hey its me super sam I read this stroie agin to see I steel cry guse what!...I cry so bye-bye

that was so sweet I love it so much it was funny! so bye-bye!:]

very nice i liked it

Holy shit, it's you! Ok, I've already read this story once before and I liked it, dispite the insanity at the end. Oh yeah, I forgot. You don't know me! This is SubzeroMonarch from DA. Your work kicks ass so keep it up. Have a lovely day.

I absolutely love it! I think I'm supposed to tell you how to improve, but there is just no way that I can think of at the moment to improve the story. It's simply amazing.

I do love the Fluff! this is great stuff, a good idea, well writtne

aw, you had me going there too! I thought Rouge wasn't gunna get there in time. nice story, two thumbs up!

Damn...

And wow. Star, if you don't mind my calling you that, I read alot of your stories. I enjoy them but this is one I like just because of the simplcity and still how complex it is. Even though short, it is still great. You had a great level depth to it and still kept it simple. I even turned off the media player, which is rare just so I could read it while not ruining the mood. It when from sad to depressing to angsty to lovely to fluffy to humor with love still and then you got the sex subject in at the most unexpected and yet perfect moment. I mean it had it all in small package. It was great, and I've rarely written this much for a review and I'll stop here before I ramble on about random crap like I do with other people's works. Any way, the simple version; sweet job, no need to think less of it becuase it was good.

Well, I'm out before I get ripped away from the computer by family so we can go to the "store" with all of mom's grandkids...for what? I never do crap there, all I do is sleep in the car...besides its freaking one in the morning!

It annoys me, and disinterests me because you forgot the 'e' in 'he'. Fix it.

aw how cute i love both versions

*nods head frantically* Yep yep! i liked this a lot better. lurved it!

I LOVE this! The part where she threatened to break his arm was so funny. It was sexy and passionate, perfect for a romance. LOVE IT!

Wow, I truely LOVED this story! I liked more the revised version then the original, but still, they are both very good. Keep it up!