| Reviews for The Story of The Guys |
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   muffdyvr chapter 11 . 3/19 this fic sucks balls |
| muffdyvr chapter 1 . 3/19 pulling childish pranks after being hospitalize... can you useless pussy? |
| mickeysofine chapter 1 . 11/7/2019 You do know how humans work, right? I suggest you keep that information in mind and then have a read of your work. You'll notice that your characters aren't human going by how they talk to each other and how they think. They're written like an Alien trying to make sense of something it's never seen before. Almost but not quite right, it's the uncanny valley of characterisation. |
| DR5996 chapter 11 . 7/19/2019 I'm sorry that you interrupted the fanfic, seems interesting... |
| LoneTraveler chapter 11 . 6/15/2019 Such a shame this story wasn’t developed further and finished. It was turning into a intriguing story. Well, it’s been years, but somehow I hope you get the urge to come back to these characters to work on how their lives turned out. |
| acegamer16 chapter 11 . 4/4/2019 I wish you would update it is awesome. |
| OmegaUltima chapter 11 . 4/27/2018 And once more, an apparently dead!fic; I really am starting to dislike running into interesting fics, only to reach the end of what's there, and discover they haven't been touched in years... :( |
| Jostanos chapter 9 . 12/21/2017 Doesn't Pottermore have anything about the location of Godric's Hollow? |
| Guestarino chapter 11 . 11/3/2017 Sorry you stopped writing it. It was interesting, even if it did look like you were going to let Dumbledore get away with everything. |
| KarisTasogare chapter 3 . 8/20/2017 minor thing, if you re-edit, you might want to change the '360' to '180'. after all an opostite turn is impressing , one that leaves you going in the same direction really isn't |
| DeidreCypress chapter 11 . 6/16/2017 Plz. Just finish it. I'm begging you. |
| TheGemNara chapter 7 . 6/5/2017 QUIDDITCH IS A REAL BRITISH SPORT? WELL SIGN ME UP (please don't) |
| TheGemNara chapter 6 . 6/4/2017 Oops didn't read thoroughly |
| TheGemNara chapter 5 . 6/4/2017 DON'T TALK TRASH ABOUT HARRY and really Dumblefuck |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/19/2017 Harry is retarded. He just blurts out his biggest secrets like a dumbass and the alternate reality shit was unnecessary |
