Reviews for Independence Day
jheaton chapter 17 . 5/14
Good story, but allow me to quote from your profile page: "Dislikes ... Authors that disappear leaving unfinished fics"
kimjo2 chapter 17 . 5/7
Fabulous story. Sorry you didn't finish it but thanks for this much!
BlackRose8750 chapter 17 . 4/9
Nice story. Have you abandoned it? I noticed that most of your stories are incomplete. I hope you will finish this one
mjw chapter 17 . 3/28
Excellent story... I really enjoyed reading it. Too bad it is not finished.
Corwyn chapter 17 . 3/19
Loving this story so far, and hoping you get a chance to continue it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
observentuser chapter 17 . 2/10
Hope that you carry on this story.
Thank you :-)
old-crow chapter 17 . 1/31
Hi,

Thank you for posting the seventeen chapters for this tale. I enjoyed each of them and found your story concept to work very well.

I'm sorry that you weren't able to complete this tale. Perhaps you should mark it as abandoned and up for adoption. Perhaps someone would take it to the conclusion that it deserves.

All the best,

Old-Crow
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 17 . 1/29
A great story here so far!
ScarletWraith chapter 17 . 1/11
Will you be returning to finish your story?
ScarletWraith chapter 16 . 1/11
That's new... Shacklebolt portrayed as his complete opposite in character. Can't say I like it much, but to each their own.
Capecodcanal chapter 17 . 1/8
I’ve enjoyed reading your story. I especially enjoyed the time spent investigating the Potters’ trunks and vaults. I’ve enjoyed seeing the story develop. I’m so curious what you had planned for the next phase of the story. Thanks for sharing this.
Monster King chapter 17 . 11/27/2019
Great job
Guest chapter 4 . 11/19/2019
Nice og
master bower chapter 6 . 8/10/2019
It's to your comment about an island and water at the end of this chapter the biggest problem is the lack of potable drinking water in the water around your island is salt where there is a method of getting fresh water from the salt water but it is expensive and time-consuming
Guest chapter 17 . 6/10/2019
Oh! ' .finish this delightful tale. Oh woes me. Stuck in story limbo. Did dumbles get his cumupence? Did voldy skewer himself
? Did the good guys kick but? Of course they did but how.
I hate finding good stories that no one has touched in years
I'm starting to look to see if there is an epilogue or a "the end"before even reading the first page.
Come back. Finish.
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