A shining example of how a sequel can be even better than the original! Well done, ladies! Although I am ever so fond of your original, too, Eve. Maybe one day you’ll see this review and find that you’re still gaining fans after all these years. 3

What an absolutely lovely story! really good and those final chapters were fantastic! great stuff!

I've read this story, and its prequel, twice now and can't believe that I never posted a review! Very well written stories and definitely among my favorites. Your descriptions are so well detailed, I can easily visualize each character and scene. Thank you for sharing your wonderful, talented imagination.

Wow, great sequal can't believe I hadn't read it before - thanks!

wow! she's such a cute kid! :)

Just wondering why the Asgard didn't track him leaving Earth. Ok, he took five years to sneak in, apparently, but surely when he left he could be tracked?

And don't the SGC have Prometheus at least by now? No need for Jacob's cargo ship.

Great story! Very intense! The ending was adorable! I'm glad everything worked out!

I must post about how much I love your writing style. Your experience and love as a mum shines through in all the grand and simple details. This is the third story of yours that I've read an I love it just as much as the others

This is an adored child! I can see her taling a bunch of Marines into having a tea party, however as smart as she is she Probley would talk them into bringing her back some naquida! Lol

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Is it wrong that I am having a hard time imagining Jordan with blond hair? In my mind she has jacks hair color. It's Probley bacause I have one of own "Jordan Oneils"
Loved chapter 2... On to 3

Loving it already! You are a tremendously gifted writer! Be prepared for lots more readers! Stargate is now on amazon prime, which is where I binged watched the whole series a couple months ago. (It's 9/2014) I also heard it's coming to Netflix. There will be all sorts of new fans like myself searching for more... Did you know your original story is the most reviwed story in the StarGate Sg1 category on fanfic. I have made myself a promise to review every chapter. You defiantly deserve it! Do you still write? Lol... Do you ever come back here? It's been 6 years since the story was updated... I feel like I am little late in the ball game. Jordan is so adorable and precocious. Looking forward to chapter 2. I am using software that reads the story to me... So I am cleaning while listening. Thank you for making cleaning a lot more tolerable! Hugs... Marcasmi

Wonderful story!

Loved it!

A worthy sequel. Touching and terrifying both.

I particularly enjoyed the scene with the math teacher. A student of math education myself I know how horrifyingly accurate that scene is with less well trained teachers. The story is filled with little touches like that which make the story so very real.