There's something that's bugging me.

I find Cloud awfully naive for someone who's supposed to have been trained by Vincent. It baffles me that Vincent didn't even try to make him mature a little on the principle of "propaganda". It's a little worrying and it feels like a waste of time if Cloud is still as stupid and ignorant as in canon. And there's still the problem with his mako sensibility. I'm not sure if I want to read all of this just to see him fail his soldier exam.

It seems like he will receive a big reality check that a "certain" person could have given him sooner. Like a bashing in waiting. Hope I'm wrong.

I'm going to correct you whenever I damn well feel like it man.

Nooo! You messed up Zack's name!

This, I enjoy. Read more, I must now.

Awesome

Thank you for the great story! I was wondering why you went with Sinclair as Zack’s surname? Is this an AU? Is Reno and Zack related? I am curious why you chose it over Zack Fair?

The extent of the divergances was far reaching and multicharacter focused, and you pulled it off amazingly!

Enjoyed this story quite a lot, wish there was more CloTi though.

There's got be a very careful balancing act of when someone is accepted to the SOLDIER program. They'd have to be skilled enough to be accepted but not so skilled that they'd have to unlearn reflexes that the enhancements would make deadly.

Don't want someone giving a slight push back in a fight and caving in a rib cage.

When it takes you 15 chapters or so to remember what year this fic was published all the while wondering why the heck angael and genesis weren't popping up... needless to say I felt quite stupid after; either way, this is definitely a good fic and it’s admittedly quite strange to read something this old yet has aged extremely well considering the ff7 universe’s development in plot.

Noooooooooooo... I love cloud/zack and cloud/zack/Sephiroth. Oh well. The story's still really good though

Yeah. I wouldn't like being told over and over again about a 'mistake' that wasn't my fault either. I love the name you chose for zack, though! There's another story where Reno has that name you know, and it reminds me of reborn from katekyo hitman reborn.

I love this story. But there's just one thing that I'm still not comfortable with...I never really liked the idea of a couple adding another person to their relationship. I always feel sad, and awkward, and a little hurt sometimes whenever i come across stories where Cloud, at one point, would be added to a threesome, or at one point five of them. But then again, I always got over with it in the end (because damn, if that story is GOOD, then I just go with it)

But then, I just really prefer Cloud in a one on one relationship only...

So I started reading on Friday and finished today. This is my first significant foray into VII fic and you dragged me into this story. I don’t have a whole lot to say but definitely felt like I needdd to let you know how much I enjoyed your work!

This was an awesome story! I love the fact Sephiroth never went insane.