Holy shiiiiiiiiit.
I absolutely loved it. emotion you put into ed's charactor and even the idiodicness of Havoc of Hues... BEUTIFUL! Hearts to you!️

Hi!
I like very much this story! As well for the beginning with a depressive Ed, and also the final battle and the chapter with Al. Thanks for the nice time for the reader I am.

Why are you trying to make me cry? That is not nice. Great story tho!

WAAAAAIIIIIITTTTTTT! WHERE THE HELL IS HIS CAT!

I really like it so far! I hope constructive criticism is okay? With Scar, even though it is pure destruction, he has to know what he is destroying. There is a fight in brotherhood when he goes to destroy Edward, but couldn't because he didn't realize Edwards arm was metal. Therefore, if he was going after Edwards flesh, Alphonse's suit wouldn't have exploded.

I really love the story, though! I apologize if it sounds rude, I just wanted to mention something before someone else was mean about it.

I really enjoyed reading this so thank you for writing it! :)

Half brothers actually. They are related.

Hey I no this is rather late. But the story was great
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So Im rereading this and I just realized something, I understand he named the cat Alphonse because Al loves cats, but then I realized.. It was a grey cat. Al's armor is grey *internally cries*

. . . you made me want to cry. multiple times. evil. . .

but it was wonderful. perfect and sad and wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. EdWin YAY!

no Al . . . T-T

it was fantastic and i loved it.

Multiple streams of tears

One of the best FMA fanfics I've ever read. Keep being awesome

Chapter Four? You already almost made me cry

-Starts bawling- Why you! -starts throwing random stuff at author- Quit making Edward suffer!