This is good :)

That was nice. I loved this line:

It is amazing how hard it is to hate him,

and how easy it is to hate herself.

I loved the subtle hope at the end. Very good story.

Oo angsty. It's much loved!

Very cool. Please write another chapter.

Really good story

Thank you! I love the emotion you portray when the characters are attempting to not show emotion! Wonderful story...please keep it up!

Love it!

I really enjoyed that. I think my favorite thing about it is when House says that Cam doesn't like him and her eventual response. Throwing it back in his face - good move, and not cheesy. I like the calm tension of their interaction. (does that make sense?)

that was perfect! dare i hope for a continuation?

amazing! it's absolutely wonderful! perfect! sequel, please!

wow that was great! thanks for posting it!

Wow...the flow of your writing is amazing. I loved the whole story and the ending was perfect. Your descriptions of their emotions and mannerisms made me feel like I was watching this play out insted of reading.

Bravo! Please continue!