| Reviews for Marriage, Millionaires, and Motorcycles OLD |
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MyFavoriteDaydream chapter 1 . 11/29/2010 *AUTHOR NOTE* I am considering restarting this fanfic with an edited version of chapter 1. This particular fanfic will remain posted, however it will no longer be updated. Thank you for the support. |
readlife chapter 6 . 11/27/2010 Despite the serious undertone, this is a very cute story. The pace feels a bit fast somehow, but the story is great. Also the grammar is well done, something that is fairly rare. Keep the chapters coming, they're really good! |
V-Roxie-V chapter 5 . 9/18/2007 Golly lolly! A whole year since this has been updated... -sniffle- I loved this story... |
soji chapter 1 . 6/6/2007 AWESOME! I love it so far! |
Shiori Sakurazawa chapter 6 . 2/27/2007 nice...plz...continue... -puppy dog eyes- plz? |
V-Roxie-V chapter 6 . 2/4/2007 Don't stop now! I really like this! And I'm sorry, but I know nothing about courts. :p Sorry. But please continue! It is really good. One thing though : Try to avoid giant blocks of text. It's hard on the eyes. |
believeitgirl chapter 4 . 8/8/2006 i love it! i need more! |
Heat in Freezing chapter 4 . 7/4/2006 I LOVE THIS STORY, IT ROCKS, Please update it! Don't abandon it because mars isn't the most popular fandom! |
Heat in Freezing chapter 2 . 7/4/2006 THIS STORY ROCKS! I just finnished readin all of the MARS Series, it rocks, I love it so much, and you portray the characters perfectly! please update! :D:D:D |
Krita chapter 1 . 4/27/2006 wow is all i have to say, this is an amazing story. Suspensful and very detailed. I would never guess you didn't know stuff about motocross. wow again. |
PetiteCityPrincess chapter 4 . 4/22/2006 Hi! I'm to fanfiction, but yours was the first story I read, and I hope that your planning to continue! I love Mars, and your take on the life after marriage was awesome! |
aiden-san chapter 4 . 4/20/2006 that was great send me more chapsto me please! |
Cuz I Can chapter 4 . 4/17/2006 Ok, i wasnt expecting that! but it was still good. About what you said in the other chapter, i think you should keep the story going until the baby's gone and then do like an epilouge of how their life is with the kid when its like 2 or 3 or something. Anyway, good, good, i like, update soon! |
KittyMay chapter 4 . 4/16/2006 So good! I really like the whole story so far! So keep up the good work! XD |
KittyMay chapter 3 . 4/15/2006 Long story! D Oh and bye the way, I LOVE THE STORY! So good! D Update as soon as you can. Please? |