So much for acting like an adult, fred, lol.

Uh oh, ron is yelling like retard again, gg.

I don’t know how I forced myself to read this story until the point I did , is the worst thing I’ve ever read. I hate this story like I never hated one before. You romanticized rape. There are a lot of other things that make this story ridiculous but rape is rape. I can’t even begin to guess what most be wrong with someone to write something like this, I feel sorry for you, and I truly hope that is not how you see life and relationships to be. And if this is how you see things to be, please seek help, rape is abominable! There is nothing hot, sexy ou acceptable to it. I cannot express how this story disgusted me.

Despite the red flags in earlier chapters, I kept on reading. But I just can't anymore. You are romanticizing rape. As the other review said, no amount of fluff is going to take away from the abusive relationship. The characters are so OOC, it might as well be a whole different fandom. For example, Hermione has no backbone whatsoever, and Fred is nowhere near his jokester persona. You said there's a reason for Fred being this way, but damn. It sure is taking forever just to figure out why. And why is Hermione always passing out? I feel like she has passed out at least once per chapter.

I’m sorry I couldn’t finish this story. It’s too incomplete and the characters are either over exaggerated or under used. The relationship with Fred and Hermione is Toxic and will become abusive no matter how much “fluff” you try to add to soften it. Hermione is this strong character and you’ve reduced her to this shriveling little girl with no spine who lets herself get walked all over. Fred is acting extreme and the fact that everyone is just smoothing over the fact that he will possibly rape Hermione is disgusting. Rape shouldn’t be romanticized, and I’m a little disappointed that this story could have been so much better. There is a difference between dominant and complete control.

aww cute fic xx

it's been scary emotional roller coaster story.. you made fred's character so immature results in hermione's living hell. i think it's not a way to atone. what? force her to hate him knowing she doesnt have a way out of marriage? that's useless..he should be doing the opposite to atone

BEAUTIFUL!

it is harder to enjoy if you cannot make out the words.

ugh! no more cliffhangers!

Good story but you need to have a rape trigger on it.

Okay I liked this story and I love the different take on the law...bit weird at times but good. However, that being said you seriously need to edit your work. There's multiple times with repetitive words, jumbled sentences, and misspellings. I'm quite capable of interpreting what ppl genuinely mean but I feel a lot of others would just get frustrated. I know this is complete but it never hurts to go back and edit.

They made love

Fred and Hermione married

good story