Reviews for Unwanted
Heroine of the Valley chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
I'd like to see more. I'm writing a fanfic about Merope too and so I'm reading up on Merope fics.
Heroine of the Valley chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Aww, so sad.
DaBlueArmy chapter 2 . 3/9/2010
great story
Kitkat200725 chapter 2 . 8/4/2007
cool fic, it's nice to take a break from the average pairings in hp. poor merope T_T
ronhermione007 chapter 2 . 6/3/2007
i rather like it...hmm good fic you normally dont read ones about this pair often! good story do continue
FanFreak2002 chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
Very Good
A Nonny Mouse chapter 2 . 1/24/2007
I like it so far. You said that it was going to be your own version of the story. Do you mean your own telling of Dumbledore's theories about how Merope and Tom ended up together? Or do you mean that you're going to have Tom fall in love with her naturally? Either way, I'm curious as to where this is going. It's been over a year since you've updated though... Did you abandon this story?
jnfcjkfskfljslfjsl chapter 2 . 2/2/2006
Oh. My. God. This is amazing Jo. Words aren't good enough to explain how good this is. Just wow. Please update soon, otherwise there will be war. Only joking but please update. There really isn't anything wrong with this and you nearly inspired me to write a fic of my own but I then thought about it and decided no. Well love you lots Emma xx
Sorry I lost enthusiasm chapter 2 . 1/30/2006
AAW! Poor poor Merope!

How can he be so cruel? Aaw

PLEASE ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER MOJO!

Its a reeally good story :)

Even if her Father is eevil. Aw, even if she is slightly obssessive. But you kinda want to cuddle her, but then again not.

It is very cleverly written that way :)
Sarah123Babe chapter 2 . 1/30/2006
Need.. More.. Please.. xD

Please Update ;]

Well written btw p
Mobilicorpus chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
Well done, this is an excellent fic. I deeply apologise for my mistake in missing out the spelling of "past" as "passed".

I think it's well written and interesting, and captures the character of Merope Gaunt and I look forward to seeing how you deal with this interesting, slightly fairytale-like story. I think your style of writing is very suitable for this kind of story.

Go you!
jnfcjkfskfljslfjsl chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Hiya Jo it's Emma. Wow that is amazing. so good. YOu little biatch being able to write like that. Only joking you're not a biatch. I love you so much and this fic is really really good. Please update soon. emma x
SJ chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Wow! You're too good at writing Jo ] Umm.. I like the bit from Merope's view!

Luv ya!

xx
Rachel chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
good job! i never thought of it from her point of view...cool idea!