Impressive as always. Love it and can't wait to read the next episode.

Ok, there was that one thing about the previous chapter that pissed me off, but this chapter was hilarious, and I loved all the character interaction.

That...that... Kennedy, actually put the moves on Tara? And you think Tara would go for it? And, I, Grrr, i mean reall shfudam why why why why why afhfaftfedlasjfklasjhafte;jklrasgedjkfskijlldf;plsno ow diefdfsadiedie:&*-

AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

rebooting

Please, Traya, be jealous, kill Kennedy, then, um, I don't even care, just do that. On this particular occasion, I'll be more than happy if evil claims one little itsy bitty victory. I am feeling the dark side. I'm eating the proverbial cookies. All of my hate Kennedy, all of my hate.

(For the record, I DID hate Kennedy before I knew anyone else did, I didn't jump on some hater bandwagon.)

I love this chapter. Just to let you know I think you should do something like this but Obidala.

The start of this part was kind of predictable. Obviously Buffy couldn't just stay on Corellia with Jacen, as she is one of the main characters. I will admit I was wondering if you'd killed Han and Joyce for a long while, though. I thought you'd killed one of my favorite non-Jedi SW characters! I also didn't see Giles coming. I figured that Buffy would just pull another victory out of a hat, but you gave Traya's defeat quite the interesting twist. (Where did you come up with the name "Traya", anyway? Is it Latin like the rest of the Sith names?)

Awesome! I laughed out loud when buffy used her mind trick on sir dickless. Best story out of the 3 I have read so far.

Normally I would wait to review until I finished the whole story, but I gotta say the interactions between the masters in the council is awesome. We don't get to see the council meetings like that in the movies and you do an awesome job portraying them.

WOW.

Now THAT was a nice little twist you worked in there; at the last minute, when all is lost, the rescue party from Earth drop in to turn the tide, and the resulting shift is VERY dramatic.

Which isn’t to say that what took place beforehand wasn’t good as well; Buffy’s emotions at the loss of her new family were very clearly written, and her reaction to her visions of Anakin becoming Vader were particularly well-presented, to say nothing of her response to being reunited with the old gang from Sunnydale.

Plus, of course, the fight with Grievous was BRILLIANT; after all the trouble he caused so many Jedi in the original series, Buffy takes out the ‘walking tin-can’ in barely a few seconds simple by using a less orthodox strategy than he was expecting.

And as for the Scooby Gang’s reactions to learning about Buffy’s new life...

I think I’ll always remember Faith calling Yoda a muppet, if nothing else, even if Xander’s reaction to being in space and Dawn’s thoughts on the Padawan hairstyle were rather amusing as well (Buffy’s confrontation with Willow after Xander brought her back was PARTICULARLY chilling, to say the least; even after saving Willow, it’s clear that NOTHING is going to be the same between them).

And as for your OC of Nigel Ambrose-Bellairs…

A PERFECT example of everything that was wrong with the old Watcher’s Council and a character that it is thus VERY easy to hate; the prat’s role might have been minor, but I greatly enjoyed seeing him get what was coming to him when Buffy returned.

Admittedly, I was surprised Anakin didn’t put a BIT more independent thought into the idea of using the Dark Side in this version of events, given that he has Willow as a prime example of somebody who was corrupted by it, but given that all evidence suggests that the two of them didn’t spend much time together before Willow’s fall to the Dark Side it’s not like it’s impossible to assume he just didn’t think much about using her as an ‘example’ because he hasn’t spent much time with either ‘version’ of her.

In the end, my main problem is the Buffy/Jacen thing; while it was an interesting touch, it didn’t really seem to add anything to the overall plot, particularly since Jacen was around so briefly that we never even really got a chance to get why Buffy married HIM.

The summary you gave us of her relationship with him was interesting, don’t get me wrong, but in the end his presence just felt rather ‘tagged on’, like you only included him to give Buffy a REASON for not being around for three years of Anakin’s life and thus give Palpatine a chance to gain more influence over him; if you’d at least had Jacen appear BRIEFLY in a previous story- thus establishing a pre-existing ‘rapport’ between him and Buffy that was deepened when they were stuck together- it would have seemed a bit less like you were only using him as an excuse...

The same problem applies to Buffy suggesting that Xander’s the only one who can bring Willow back from being Traya; it would have worked better if you’d shown the train of thought that led to Buffy concluding that Xander was the one who could reach the Willow in Traya, because as it was it just seemed like Buffy selected Xander for that task on a whim.

At least with Qui-Gon Jinn’s resurrection you dropped a couple of hints about that in the previous story; these latest twists came COMPLETELY out of the blue…

In the end, what happened in this story was excellent; you just needed to lay the groundwork for the events mentioned in a bit more detail, otherwise it seems like you just stuck them in at the last minute because you couldn’t think of anything else.

Still, the resolution of this chapter has lain the groundwork for some VERY interesting future plot developments; I look forward to seeing where everything goes from this point onwards.

Really good story. Keep going.

Great Story!

I haven't actually read this story yet (it is in my to read list)

but you mentioned in your group you wanted hit 300, so...

I do enjoy Finding Avalon though. Keep up the entertainment and thank you.

hahah you need to check over this sentence

"Darth Vader Rose and joined Darth Traya in front of the Chancellor’s desk. "

i know you meant that he rose but for a sec i was like..Darth Vader Rose?

:3

Just read the first three installments through and I have to say Bravo! This is the second or third Buffy/SW x-over I've read that start's with Glory's portal, but this is the first I've seen that was so comprehensive and complete. It was a very enjoyable read, and I'm looking forward to starting the rest!

Yeah! you talked about Thrawn!(even if only for four lines)He was so cool(Curse you traitor-who-stabbed-him)I love your story!

NAITCH.. GROWL. Hurry up! You updated the other story. Also hope your 4th of July was safe & fun. Update soon t/c jedi