I'm tired of all the fluffy ZADR's this one strongly shows how their relation would be. GOOD JOB

Really good job dude!

This is so fucked up. Soooo fucked up. Loove it.

Beautiful in a sadistic sort of way. Good work.

...Zim, can you say DENIAL?

alas, awesome story!...i'm really a sucjer for yaoi sex...DAMN! I'M A PERVERT!*bangs head on the wall*

That was really good. I loved the short spurlts of action inbetween the talk of hate and obsession...an interesting way to look at their relationship.

~Tae

Strange how dark fics make me happy. Guess I'm just weird.

Beans

That was bloody, feirce, and somehow...kinky.

o_O

Ignore what I just said. Infact, stop reading this review. Now.

I know this is a late review. ] But. I love this. Not...sadistically. I'm not complaining, because I knew that's what I was getting into but I love the way you wrote this. It's bloody brilliant. I mean, honestly. I'm speechless. It's just...I don't know. I can't describe it. I love the way you started it, ended it, and everything in between. It's wonderful. Please write more stories. :]

*purrs* Very nice- very nice indeed.

I love the transition work in it and the overall idea.

(hyperventilates) (says in one breath) Oh my freakin' gawd that was really really cool! AND SMEXY!

I take my Rhetorical Hat off to you.

wow. delicously evil just like the other one i just read. please do write more.

Wow. That's one hell of a one shot.

I really like the introspectiveness of this peice. Especially how it goes back and forth between both of their veiw points.

I love the ending. I think that's the best. *nods*

I love it. You managed to capture the warped ideas of what the characters are feeling, very well. I like.