please please please update! i need to know what happens next! this story is awesome!

I love this, so real, so sad, but really great. You captured the characters so well. I hope you haven't abandoned this because it really is an interesting and unique story. I hope you'll continue with it.

This is the BEST story. Are you going to continue?

wow, i simply adore this fic. please update again soon!

I warn you now I write crazy ass long reviews. _” Just to forewarn lol.

First of all I love the concept. I think that screen play was just amazing and I would’ve loved to see how it would’ve turned out. I mean Rent moviegood, but still it would’ve been really interesting so it’s so neat to see this fic based off of what I thought was a wonderfully written screen play so I’m really excited to read more!

Okay so by chapter 1, I was in love with your Mimi, just the many depths that you have in the way that you write her. Y’know she’s sweet without being too sweet which I think is a lot of author’s problems when they attempt to write her or a lot of actors problems when they attempt to interpret her is they make her overly sweet. But your Mimi is just the perfect amount of sweet, believable and likeable.

Loved this line: “I’m glad you’re a fuck-up,” _

I’m also really loving all the flashbacks that you provide, because it shows a lot about what makes Mimi who she is...and adds so much to the story. And I’m feeling so bad for the poor girl. The flashbacks are also just so heartbreaking and emotional to read, very well written, but hard to get through.

Hahaha at Mimi “making” Mark get into bed with Roger that was amazingly funny. It made me giggle a lot.

I love that Mark said this line, “Because every time you come out here to be by yourself, it means you’re thinking of doing something like jumping off that railing.” I don’t know why I just have love for random lines. I actually loved that whole conversation those two had at that point

Oh wow this last chapter…made me so incredibly sad in ways I can’t even describe… first seeing Mark like this… just at the end of his rope I think I mean God taking care of Roger for so long just to get it all shoved back in his face and the image of him turning off the answering machine… had me near tears, so heart breaking. And then the fight between Roger and Mimi…wow, very powerful and again the best way I can describe it is heart breaking.

I love your style seriously…It’s so real, y’know..that’s the best word I can find it. It’s very emotional but all that emotion and heartbreak is just so real the way you write it and I love it, it gets me emotionally involved You have an amazing grasp for all the characters especially how they appear in that screen play since they are different in that screen play and you got that so perfectly in this. Love it.

And wow. Haha… I TALK A LOT. Sorry. Long review…wooh. _”

so good! please update soon!

Wow...

This story is AMAZINGLY AWESOME. So sad though...I would tell you "Write more now!" but your writing is so incredibly good that I don't want you to rush.

Mark makes me sad! Because he does care, Maureen is wrong, but then he stops...okay, actually all of them make me sad right now. Except maybe Collins. Anyway, good job; looking forward to updates :-)

I love this story, I simply can't get enough! You have the characters down, I am picturing everything in my head as I'm reading, it's amazing! I'm sorry that you're sick though, please get better soon so you can update ASAP! Great job! Cheers!

Arwen5

God, I didn't think this could get better! Great chapter, great story, please update soon!

plzz update like... now?

man Roger pisses me off sometimes! What an ass!

This is very extrememly good gal! I love it!

Keep it up!

~DFS

You're really good at writing intense scenes :) Nice chapter!

Nice angst in this chapter. I can't wait for more.

Very sad, but in a good way. Update soon!

Right. Well then I guess Mimi is not going to leave the hospital and I guess Roger is leaving? ::pouts::. That's sad. The whole thing about silence being a side effect of sickness is really true. And tears. It's not easy.::sighs:: Oh well. I love the conversation between Collins and Mimi, it was really nice. I like the 3rd person present tense, it's something different. Congrats on winning 3rd place at speedrent.

Happiness,

Emm )