This was one of the best. Better than best. Best of all.

I LOVED it.

Congrats on finishing your story!

Okay, I accept the whole suspension-of-disbelief thing when I read fairy tales, but there were a few plot points that I missed. How is Geric the crown prince? You explained the family lineage clearly and then never explained how it was suddenly all untrue and Geric was the prince. Also I would want some clarity on the princes-can-have-multiple-wives issue. I think Jas would want some clarity on it too. And while I can accept that Geric didn't know who Jas was, it is REALLY hard to believe that she would live in the kingdom for months and never hear somebody mention who the princes were.

Stablehands at a ball? I like it, but it needs a set-up. You need to explain that this country is a country that is not big on formality. Make it a positive point that the royalty sees everyone as equals.

That said, I did enjoy your story and admire you for writing it.

I can't remember my password to log in, but this is taswmom, and I just found and read your story, and wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed it. I am glad that you hung in there and finished it, or I wouldn't have read it. Thank you for your perserverence, and for sharing your talent with me.

This is a really nice fairy tale.

This story is smashing!
Though I wonder what kind of place Kilmere is, and what the setting of the story is.
Is it a tropical place? A cold place? A perfect place?
MidnightParade

This story is amazing! I had overlooked it, as in the description your punctuation is off. I recomened you fix it, and you'll get a lot more readers!

I loved it! Jas was hilarious. The ending about smashing into a sunset is great.

PeaceLoveBrownies

I just read this story and I think you really have a talent for writing. I know it has been a while since this story strated but I read it until 2 in the morning. I believe that this was a great story and that you should keep writing.

I loved it so much!

You're on your way to your 200th review :)

By the way, so who is the old guy who was sitting next to the king? Was that Geric's older brother or father or someone?

Yay! You finished! I'm still wondering how Geric is the crown prince when you said he was, like, really really old.

ps. Sorry if there are any mistakes in my spelling in this review or the one before, 'cause it's hard to write (type?) on the ipod.

Awwwww I liked this story alot. It was really cute! Despite the fact that it was a little predictible, it was still a great story and held my instrest until the end. I hope that you keep writing and I'll be sure to check out some of your other stories at a later time. Until then buh bye!

(P.S 44 stories? Dang that's alot...)

hoooly shit, sard. This was the last thing I ever expected to see in my email inbox ever...especially because I haven't been on fanfiction in quite a while!

Haha, welllll, I'm glad you finally decided to finish this story!

...too bad I might have to reread it to remember what it was about.

Ooohhh god... I'm gonna start reading ffiction again; it's been waay too long and I forgot how awesome a lot of them were.

(hint, hint...maybe you should complete the other stories?) :D

haha, anyways, I've missed you dearly. Thank you for finishing AND renewing my love for fanfiction...I'm never gonna get any work done now...

mwah.

~hoolihoopgrl131

Eeep! Cliffy! Why must you torture us so? Leaving ut off with a cliffhanger like THAT! And leaving the story sitting there for YEARS! I mean, I suspected this, but never anticipated what would happen next. Also, I thought that the crown prince was REALLY OLD! Wow...I am being very dramatic at the moment with a big word like anticipated, I mean seriously, who uses that word regularly? Look at me, getting off topic! Anyway, baxk to your story. It is really really really awesome so could you please update? Pretty pretty pretty please with a dozen cherries on top and extra sugar?