Amazing, creepy, mysterious, haunting I will definetly treasure this in my mind for long! At first it was hard for me understand that the two people Hisoka encountered were Tsuzuki and Muraki, I figured it out just after I finished it... Still the unknowing made it even more mysterious, I loved this fanfic!

Absolutely stunning. I love your writing, it's very lyrical and artistic. It has the flow of poetry

-Bharune

A very well-written story. Beautifully dectriptive scenes, and you captured the emotions throughout the story. It was dark in the nice morbid way I enjoy.

Thank you so much for writing this! Luvies!

I do remember ths story read it before I was a member. It was actually good, and to be exact one of my fav.

That was so beautiful.

Holy shit. I have no word for this other than "gorgeous."

...okay, maybe a few more words. Gorgeous. Astoundingly well-written; dark in a creepy, satisfying way; vague enough to let the subtle meanings behind words sneak up and gradually unsettle the reader. This is the sort of thing I'd love to write.

Excellent, wonderful job. Thank you. Onto the faves list it goes!

I really liked your story. My english isnt very good, so there are parts I dont get, but it is very well written :D

This was wonderful to read. I enjoyed the style of train of thought that you used- it flowed and looped like some beautifully complex knot. I love how it is hints and not explanations. When i first read it, I missed who the first man was. Then I looked back and understood. That's not a bad thing- with this type of writing, it's good.

Wow. The atmosphere of this story is incredible. So dark and... I don't know, goth? I absolutely love it.