| Reviews for Then There Were Three |
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   JustASomewhatNormalKid chapter 3 . 9/17/2015 This is like my third? Time reading this and it always makes me cry. Really really sad. Boo hoo. That was great and I thought u did a great job at protraing the rest of the teams POV. |
| Book girl fan chapter 3 . 11/17/2013 It wasn't that obvious that it was Johnny. In fact, I missed the first sentence of this chapter, and thought it was Ben! You did a really good job with keeping it mysterious. |
| Sparkiebunny chapter 3 . 7/8/2010 *Wipes away tears* I've never had a FF story make me cry! This was beautiful! The last line is what did it for moe. The entire story was great, but that line made it perfect. I loved the element of mystery. Everyone was very in-character. I LOVED it! :D |
| Little Anah chapter 3 . 2/1/2008 This was a great story, the point of views you portrayed with the different characters was wonderful. My favorite part was at the end, when the sun peaked through the clouds; and Ben said, "Flame on, Kid." It sent chills, it was brilliant. Kudos. -Katie |
| heartfallen chapter 3 . 10/20/2007 that was so sad! excellent story idea! |
| Iaveina chapter 3 . 7/26/2007 Ooh! Please write the actual Johnny dying story! ...eh, but it's your call! P Lovely story! |
| monkE4sale chapter 3 . 4/14/2007 aw.. its always johnny to go! :(. but that was an amazing story. |
| nyx372040 chapter 3 . 3/8/2007 good story! well done! |
| Celtic Pixie chapter 2 . 10/9/2006 Okay so I was right with my first guess |
| Celtic Pixie chapter 1 . 10/9/2006 Its either her brother or Reed |
| mel087 chapter 3 . 8/2/2006 hey that was really good and really sad! keep up the great writing! |
| elfmaiden4legs chapter 3 . 7/2/2006 That was beautiful! |
| Seven Positions chapter 3 . 2/19/2006 Oh... That was a really good ending line. What with the sun shining and all. Anyway. There are aspects that need work, but not in the makeup of the story itself. It's mostly spelling and stuff. The story and the dialogue are good. (Plus, I love Johnny stories.) |
| Freedra Kyes chapter 3 . 1/31/2006 oh, wow...It was so wonderfully written. As soon as I started reading it, i felt a pit in my stomach and as soon as i finished the last chapter, i burst out crying. It was totally awesome. Good job. I especially love the "Flame on, kid" part. Totally memorable. You did a wonderful job conveying the grief and sadness. Now, i'm going to find something a bit lighter to read. Ciao! Freed. |
| darkflame1516 chapter 3 . 1/3/2006 no Ben's pov was perfect. really good story u got. u should write a sequel. maybe something about how the others deal with the lost. in greater detail. or years in the future how their kids learn of Johnny. keep up the good work! |
