HOLY FUCK THAT WAS INTENSE OH MY GAWD

Wow.

This is the literal definition of bad.

I haven't read such cringeworthy fanfiction in a long time.

Even Ebony Darkness Dementia was better ugh.

That's telling you how bad this is.

Super OOC and CRINGE.

Ugh.

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Hmmm ... While everyone else is asleep, with no one else knowing where she is, Hermione decides to go wandering around by herself in the middle of the night, in the castle full of Death Eater students still at Hogwarts, with Voldemort due to attack at any time ... AND SHE LEAVES HER WAND IN HER ROOM? What was she thinking? Any Hermione who would do such a foolish thing is a complete idiot and far too stupid to be Head Girl! Where was that famous brain? Has she become what she used to criticize - a witch without common sense? Hermione, more than anyone, knows how dangerous the castle is, simply from her long association with Harry.

All I can say is that Hermione is lucky Harry was "plugged into" the wards, or whatever, and came to save her.

pretty cool one-shot!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)

A bit bland and frankly poorly written. The numerous problems with grammar take away from your tale. murderer vs. murder, whether vs. weather and that's just in the first paragraph.

No master, more like apprentice.

Couldn't get past the first few paragraphs.

1. Look up the difference between 'weather' and 'whether'.

2. When you're done that, look up the difference between 'your' and 'you're'.

3. Don't write anymore stories until you understand that there is a difference.

4. Once you understand, come back to this story and correct the absolutely horrible grammatical errors you have committed. I may then be able to finish reading this story.

I know I'm late on reading this story but Is it bad that during the song thingy I keep thinking you got the moves like Jagger hehe

Good story.

Enough...exactly the word i said after reading the first few paragraphs of this chapter. One year and now he is a trained assassin in both magical and normal ways? Changed his body from runt to bodybuilder?

Good story. Thanks for sharing it :)

Jesus Christ Almighty, what a piece of redolent shit this story is. How the blazes it got nearly 200 favs I don't know, except that there are a lot of braindamaged idiots reading these things. Do the world a favor and NEVER WRITE AGAIN.

Magical Britain is in a state of war. Terrorists are running around as they please. There are Death Eaters in Hogwarts. Or at least relatives of known Death Eaters. The Hogwarts wards NEVER kept Death Eaters from running around on the grounds. Snape, Malfoy Sr., Malfoy Jr., Karkaroff, McNair, Pettigrew. (That Vanishing Cabinet shit in sixth year was the most stupid thing Drakeypoo could have done. They could easily have walked into the start-of-term feast and killed everyone with fiendfyre.) Hermione is a prime target because of her heritage and because she's better than any of them AND the best friend of Riddles arch nemesis.

And she just decides to take a stroll around the castle at night WITHOUT HER WAND!

No. Just NO!

Dont write porn you'll be ok...

you just had to quote transformers huh? nice story tho

I would be very happy to add my support to 'save our fanfiction' but I am not knowledgable enough to get to the site/page? to do so. I am quite happy for you to do it for me if that is possible.
I do not agree in the least with what FFn are doing as it is very like 'Big Brother'. If an author wants ti write it and a reader wants to read it FFN have no right to prevent it. If the reader does not want to read about certain things then nobody is forcing them to. ANONYMOUS REVIEWS MEAN NOTHING. I the reviewer does not sign the review then it should not be posted.

Specky Clarke. (David Donbavand)