My gosh, I love screamshipping! _ I really like this fic so far, and I look forward to seeing a new chapter! Awesome job on this! ;D
Happy Writing!
mbpokemonrulez (:

screamshipping! *dances happily* how i luv this fic! :D

*screaming* WAKE UP SERENITY!

update please

This is really good! I usually don't like Screamshipping but this story is very interesting

You should continue it would be a great story.

oh thats not good. thats bad. very bad. good work poq out

Interesting. Keep me posted.

I love screamshipping!

You have some grammatical errors, for example:

~perverted weirdoes~

Weirdos.

~“You know, it’s getting late, but I’d rather do it now then in the morning.”~

Than.

~If there was one thing Serenity hated about her self, it was her inability to say no.~

Herself.

I am intrigued. I love this pairing. Please update.

yay story! this makes me happy! keep it up monkey! let rachael edit it.

I'm so curious!

And, now I have another story in my faves. :D

~Kitsy

eep! update soom! i think i'm going to like it!

Yay screamshipping!

A really good start - I can't wait to read more!

x Flowerperson x

(grins) One word: "Nice."

Now, I don't know if you are one of those authors who either loves praise, or perhaps, likes long, detailed reviews with reasons as to why the reviewer likes it. In any case, I'll see what I can do to suit your needs-whatever they may be.

Heh, so much like Jounouchi/Joey. Words to describe yours? Lazy, indolent, ignornant. In other words, you simply caught him and his character "perfectly."

Also, I am curious about the Ryou chase scene. Did you happen to have gotten the inspiration for that from the anime version of EA (Egyptian Arc-or its english dub name, Millennium World?) 'Cause if so, I thought you used that reference well. If not- well... It still serves the story some justice.

Anyway, I really do hope that you will continue with this fiction. It would be nice to see what Bakura does to her! :D

-Imperfect Paradise