I really like this first chapeter but there's a mistake where you say inuyasha instead of sesshoumaru but you mention the engagement

Loved it

Thats not the chicken dance thats the hokey pokey

about damn time!man! i was starting to get bord.

-looks at half empty coke cwn from before- -while standing- -skims through paragraph 5 times- -drops can and the rest of the soda spills on the floor- -eyes are bulging out of sockets- "WHAT?!"

-me in the middle of reading while drinking some random coke- -starts spitting out coke- "ENGAGED?!"

same like korean drama full house

that evil bitch tricking my sesshou chibi she better beware

LMAO. I could hardly stop laughing through the begining of this. then I couldn't stop smiling. Cute ending!

buwna historia!

I'm sorry to say this, but this is bad. This looks like it was written by a twelve year old. I got through the first two segments of the first chapter, and after choking down the numerous grammatical errors, I found that 95% of what was written was dialogue. I am sorry, but this is not the mark of a good author. Even a play will have more narration then this.

Just out of curiosity, I jumped ahead to the second chapter and found that this to was 95% dialogue. I jumped ahead further to the last chapter and saw about 80% dialogue. Too much dialogue means that there is essentially no introspection, no deep feelings and no worthwhile plot developments. For this reason, I find it impossible to continue reading past the point I already have.

I took a quick look at your profile and found that you are 18 years old (at the time I wrote this review). Considering the fact that you are still an active user of , I strongly suggest that you revisit this work so that readers at a High School/ College level may read and enjoy this. As it stands, you can only gain positive feedback from 12 year olds'.

I'm not writing this to be a b****, far from it. I just know that most people browsing through Sess/Kag fictions with reading levels greater then Junior High School will read 1/4 of your first chapter then leave. I know it's harsh, but it's true. Most people just don't care to write a negative review. You may believe that the mark of a good author comes from the number of reviews their story receives, but that sentiment is pure fallacy. While I congratulate you on your 1000 reviews, I have read many excellent Sess/Kag fictions with less than 200.

Please take this review as an honest criticism and not a flame. I am only 21, just a few years older than you, but if I had written this work in my early writing years, I would have already gone back and revised it by now or simply taken it down entirely out of pure embarrassment.

:(

I would totally kick my future husband in the groin... I LOVE YOUR STORY! IT WAS SO DAMN AMAZING I THINKS I LAUGHED SO HARD I COULDN'T BREATHE!

Full House.

i found your story today and read it and omg well done. i couldnt stop until i finished it. lol

AWE! u should make a sequel!