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Oh my goodness I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

what a terrible ending.

FINALLY! A food mononoke fanfic!

where is chapter 17!

This has been a very interesting story, and excluding the few grammar mistakes, there is nothing I could add to make it better. But I di find the ending a bit lacking. Will they meet the emperor, will they escape, who is the kind? guard (in this last chapter), etc. Do you plan on continuing this story (a sequel maybe), or is it definitely over at this point.

Really like the fic but just wondering wher 17 is... i see reviews on it and am kinda curious.

This is excelent so far ive read some other reciews and saw that quite a few where on chapter 17 but there is only 16 chapters did you remove it? if so then why?

I have to say... THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING PRINCESES MONONOKE STORY I HAVE EVER READ!

"They took the news that San and Ashitaka were bonded fairly well. Aside from a menacing growl in Ashitaka’s direction after they found out that San was pregnant with her firstborn, the wolves wished them eternal happiness in their newfound life together, and would the newlyweds please excuse them? They had had enough of seeing Ashitaka and San stare at each other." -one of my fav parts!

PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! I'M ON MY KNEES BEGGING!

Sawet. I like this fic, except that a lot of the names of the OCs aren't Japanese... Nocahan is an impossible Japanese surname, though Nochahan is or Nokahan though they aren't surnames Ive heard before. Kobayashi or Tanemura might be better. Fueli is also another impossible name as there is no 'l' in japanese. Fueri would be correct, but another very odd not japanese-sounding name. Maybe Fuuko or Kaede. And Di'Zhai sounds Chinese to me, which doesnt make sense given the time period in which Mononoke Hime is set in. Other than those minor details and some OOCness that gets out of hand a couple of times, this is very nice. Remember though a good writer is always looking out for ways to revise and fix things.

Must...print..story...BLAR! -does so- That means...I...LOVE IT! -hamster dance-

YAHOO...LIGANS!-dances like hell- Now everybody do the hamster dance! -silence- TURDS! WAKE UP! -stamps foot- Anyhoo...I just like the sudden change in mood for some of the chappies!...I cant remember if there's any dramatic irony...BUT WHO CARES! From a scale from 1 to 10 thish deserves...11! MUHAHAHAHAHA! Maniac signing off!

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-PIES OF DOOM-ETH! GUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUH!

I enjoyed your story very much. I thought it was well written and a joy to read. My only complaint is that at times some of the characters have knowledge or vocabulary that seem either out of culture or out of character entirely. This is minor though, and did not detract from the story as a whole.

Thank you for writing, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Now that was a fucking good story. I think your talent for writing is excellent, and you should not think twice about developing it as far as you desire. For me, this was definitely a night not wasted. Very pleasant read. Many thanks for writing such an enjoyable story.

The EurAzn Fool