this was a well done fic. so far, you haven't let me down yet gunman!

Eghhhh brutal

Considering you don't like Kaji that much..how unfortunate for this character. Great story, I enjoyed it.

You don't like him... But make him likeable by having him exercise restraint. Now if only every other author did that with characters they didn't like.

Really touching ;-;

TORTURE!

very well done story. Well written and well thought out.

Nice oneshot. It felt like you wanted to delve deeper and darker but pulled back... I think it would have been even better if you'd gone all the way in. Either way, nice and short read.

This was...a little hard to read. Less hard than a lot of Naruto stories I've read, but noticably harder than normal for me. If there is ever a part two to this, might I suggest a scene? It plays out as such: Ritsuko goes into an operating room to assist with the harvesting of organs from two fresh donor bodies. The bodies just happen to be the still breathing kidnappers. I know that the idea is fairly gruesome, but I feel that Ritsuko, and othersa, would consider it fair punishment for guys who consider toturing a child as a good warmup to raping another child.

Kaji turning down Misato's offer is actually fairly in-character for him. Though he is a womanizing jerk, he isn't heartless, and would have gone looking for the kidss regardless of Misato's incentive.

Keep up the great, if not so extreme, work.

I loved that! That was awesome! Great job!

Awesome story. One of the best angst/tragedies for Eva that I've read.

Transplant is about the only Eva story that brings more tears to my eyes.

Keep up the great work!

I love it!

That was a nice read. Could have added more fluff to make AXS relationship more deep. I'll be looking out for your future fics. Thanks!

All blood and gore aside, this is a very touching and heartfelt story. I have always believed that "Greater love hath no man than to lay his life down for a friend" or in this case someone you love. To put Shingi through this just reveals how strong a character he is and how he always puts others before himself. I agree I personally don't a Shingi/Asuka romance either but I'm make an exception on this one. Excellemt work.

Man talk bout emotional, keep up ze good work