| Reviews for Choices |
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   Slytherclaw Black chapter 14 . 4/23/2019 This was really sweet. Natalie |
| Archenland chapter 10 . 1/26/2015 The story started off alright but now it is extremely boring and unineteresting. This chapter was basically a lot on the bliss of their relationship, no vivid, interesting content at all. The short passages do not do the flow well. They are in chunks and disrupt the general flow. The torch thing was not actually that funny, so those few lines kind of made me cringe. Much improvement is needed. |
| tainted-tash chapter 14 . 8/27/2013 Nice names |
| tainted-tash chapter 13 . 8/27/2013 *snort* Jesus, if I got told my two best friends were dead, I wouldn't be able to even vocalise I was pregnant, I'd be distraught... |
| tainted-tash chapter 12 . 8/27/2013 Yeah, cos a pregnant woman would be using killing curses... |
| tainted-tash chapter 11 . 8/27/2013 Well, that didn't entail all you promised. So he's still a DE, we all knew it. |
| tainted-tash chapter 10 . 8/27/2013 Nawwwww! He's so sweet! |
| tainted-tash chapter 9 . 8/27/2013 Idle threats. ... |
| tainted-tash chapter 8 . 8/27/2013 Out of character indeed. Kitty? Sev? Jesus... I think I'm having a heart attack |
| tainted-tash chapter 7 . 8/27/2013 Sounds like fun. |
| tainted-tash chapter 6 . 8/27/2013 Now that's a kiss to knock your knees together. |
| tainted-tash chapter 5 . 8/27/2013 Bwahahahahaa! Oh shit, indeed! When women mature, they do tend to get prettier with time ;) |
| tainted-tash chapter 4 . 8/27/2013 Woooo! No more confusing POV shifts :) I like the plot line, though I would prefer to see Severus a little more nasty, I mean, he is meant to have a cold persona, he hates Mione, he isn't about to be all. Yes miss, no miss, three bags full miss. |
| tainted-tash chapter 3 . 8/27/2013 Sorry hun, but you need to space out your change of POV! You are seriously confusing me. One line it's Mione's POV, the next it's Severus'! |
| tainted-tash chapter 2 . 8/27/2013 Oho! Cos Severus is going to love sharing his quarters with Mione! |
