snif snif snif very very sweet T_T you really shoul make anothers fic about thie pair T_T

This... is so... BEAUTIFUL! *cries* How could you do this and make me cry? *buries face in hands* The way Taka said that he didn't feel as though he deserved Miaka... the way you described each of the pictures in the album... the poignancy of the dinner... it was so beautiful!

*recovers from tears* I'd like to point out the weak points of your story, but I can't do that. It's too much to ask... maybe someone else can...

~Mira

AW THAT IS SO SWEET! loved it!

great writes:D

_chocolate waffle-san

such a sweet story!

wahh that was so swet! that just made my sugary day! So swwet!

Oh...that is SOOOOO sweet!

Write more!

Very, very, very well written. Thank you, you've got some talent. I'll be seeing if you ever add to these stories. _

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I love it.

Ah, I'd always wondered. How did Taka respond to Miaka's tales of the Universe of the Four Gods? Perfect. And the way you caught it from a guy's perspective. Taka's perspective. Impressive. Its a moment that defines him perfectly and you've managed to catch it in a single jewel. Well done and mellow smooth, brimming over with his understated, gentle, helpless love for her.

Jen

Favorite line: she's just...she's just...perfect.

AAAAHHHH! Why haven't I seen this before? Soooo kawaii, QS! Sometimes you just need a good dose of waff, and this was it! *grins* makes me wanna go watch the OVAs again... wonderful job!

Totemo ka-wa-ii! Kawaii desu yo! (In short, how utterly romantic!) Now, I haven't seen a single scene or read a single page of the "OAVs" (whatever you'd call them in manga-format) but I loved the fic! So sweet. *sigh* One of the better FY fics here at FFnet... it's so hard to find good Miaka Taka/Tamahome ones that aren't too mushy or lemony here... Props to a great writer... keep up the excellent work! )

That was sweet. Very good.