Very good, well completed storyline! It could fill a good 2-3 standard cartoon episodes!

great story

I'd like a sequel. Don't really like the slade idea though.

First chapter, and I'm half-dead from laughter!

Bless you for writing this story! The world needs more Valerie Gray, and I absolutely loved the way you wrote her (and that little demon, Heather, too. Nice character!)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it all, and the quotes at the start of every chapter were a neat touch!
Have a nice day :D

This is a great story. I see that you haven't posted the sequel yet though. I really hope you continue it. Ether sequel would be awesome cause I am both a teen titans and freakshow fan. I know it has been many years since you update/even looked at this story, but I truly hope you make the sequel. :)

...I looked to see if you made the sequel, but I couldn't find it. Are you still going to make it?

I'm literally shaking with laughter.

Loved this! :D

Nice story, I look forward to reading more.

Just binged through this story. Quite the enjoyable read. You captured the tension between Val and Danny quite well.

U know...I am upset that u didn't publish a sequel, and especially that u stopped. I mean, it has been a long time now that u haven't update. Very long.

Ten years since DP first premiered and I was really looking forward to this story. The focus between Danny and Valerie. I was honestly not a big fan of Danny Phantom focused on his best friends, and I like reading Danny's relationship with: His family, Dash, Mr. Lancer, and Valerie.

This one isn't a revelation, not that I am happy or disappointed. But I am impress with the story. And I am impress with the relationship u performed in this story between Danny and Valerie, and how Valerie had trusted Danny Phantom. And I honestly love how Valerie admired Danny FENTON and how goofy and clumsy and how she is attracted to him.

...I duno

awesome!

YAAASSSS!