Very interesting; great narration, dialogue, and closing line. All in all, wonderful work, here!

Take care,

~September's Nobara.

Wonderful. You must write more.

I like this story alot! Fav part was the thought of a column of fire accidentally lighting a whole city..yippee! Cool Idea.

aw I love it men you should write more fics.

You've done a great job expressing Mustang's character and feelings. It's not that long but you convey a lot. It's very good.

The last line says is all. Now one of my fave quotes.

I can see you are back with a vengeance.

The events surrounding this fanfic are kind of vague as I am just recently into this anime, however, your writing is as expressive as ever. Looking forward to more FMA.

Thsi si AWSOME! You shudl write some longer fics, though i love roy angst about the wa,..there is simply not enough...r

Very well written. You're right, it was short. But it was still well written. Very descriptive. I hope you'll write more... perhaps longer stories.