This is really good! What story is this about? At first I thought it was The Lost Hero, but I can't be sure. Great poem.

good poem, i love piper and leo

I particually like how you ended it, I wasn't expecting sentimental. I like it a lot.

excellent charmed poems i love them great job

loved loved loved the last 2 lines of the last poem. they were all really good. sorry i didnt put it on author alert i didnt realize it was a series. really really good, see you were right i did love it! lol. i havent seen the last series yet, but i know the basic plot, and im gld that leo lived and there was a happy ending!

keep writting!

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Perfect and amazing i am so freaking stunned i cannot believe that u wrote this with excellence i luved the last one best i usually don't read poem fanfics but decided to try this one and i think i will read poems a little more can't wait to read ur other fics and poems i am sure they're just as good and even better luv ya

~Sparkleunicorn

interesting and pretty fitting. good.

I love it!

Oh cool! Nice job on this! Poor Piper, I hope she will get Leo back! Both of these have put tears in my eyes! Again great job!

It's very emotive. I like it. Please keep going.

OMg! that was so touching. It was realli sweet and stuff. Good job.

aw. that was very sweet. i dont think many people understand how important leo really is! lol. that was really well done. i loved it!

by that im guessing your a leo fan? do you wanna sign the save leo petition me and my friend set up?

keep writing.

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Wow, how long did it take to write it? The rhyming is genius! I would've never thought of it! Very good job on this! :)

that is really good i really like it

that was really good. everything is includes. very cool.