Mmmm, yummy. London is so hot.

That was somehow weird how would London do that to maddie they were friend for years and both of them were just playing around and it is plain rude

I think it was good truth or dare games

That was interesting. I could never see maddie and london as a couple. But this is very vivid and easy to picture. Its a good one shot! :)

HI! I just read this story today and I couldn' help but notice that this was the very best MaddiexLondon fic I'e ever read. Yeah, okay, the sex was kinda random, lol, but I liked the flow to the story, it had a plot, charachter development and genuity. I greatly encourage you to write more and practice your hand at writing smut scenes. I also couldn't help but think that they basically had an unrequited love for each other. They never said 'I Love You' or had kids or got married/a civil partnership, it's like a summer love, but for the rest of your life. But, everything has it's pros and cons :D p.s. A TIGGER FAN! :) (TTFN)

I liked it

lol strange ending like u said.. but I kinda liked it. How many stories these days end with a kind of happily ever after senereo?

This story is so sweet! and i agree, there is alot of sexual tension between these two and the whole "baby" thing proved it. there do need to be more maddieXlondon fics so... PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER MADDIEXLONDON FIC! (puppy dog face) keep up the awsome work.

what does ttfn mean? i liked the story. it wasnt the greatest ever, but it was ok

"And they stayed together until the day they died"...

Oh, I CUD JUS DY THAT WAS OS SWEETT!1!eleven!11one!1 /sarcasm

You're right, you really do need to learn how to properly end a story. However, the 'what London wants London gets' thing was semi-decent, because it was a carry on of the first sentence.

Maddie and Estaban? Were you totally running out of ideas? Wrong on SO many levels. Hell, even her and, well, Zack/Cody's mum would have been better.

Despite all that, the middle was kinda hot. But it kind of happens too quickly. You need to slow down your action.

Cheerio :)

Leonharte - cleaning up one godawful fanfic at a time.

You know what the fuck I have to say about that fucking story you wrote? Giggity giggity goo alright. Ha thought I was gonna say something bad didnt'cha.

this could be a lot longer and you could have had a second chapter. but there were some good parts

Wow! Very nicely written, and seriously hot!

hey you should make a sequel

I loved it, you need to write more or possibly come to the newly created hannah montana femslash and slash C2, we need more staff and writers.

Was awesome