Really has a lot detail

Yes definitely, plz do.

All I can think of for some reason is "what noise was made when/if the did it. Ones made of metal and the other isn't?" This is a great epilogue though none the less

I am sorry to say this but there is actually a comic where grievous finds a group of Jedi younglings/padawans and plans on killing them for there lightsabers. It is a good comic though, I suggest reading it. I won't spoil it.

Have to admit, that was a pretty smart move made by grievous.

Hey i was wandering i really like the story will you ever make a sequel? If so when?

I love this story a whooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooole lot! I hope that you make sequel with Grievous, Shaak Ti and they're kid helping Ezra and the Rebels in Star Wars Rebels, that would be awesome! PLEASE make a sequel as soon as possible!

Continue, I will wait with impatience.

I liked this story, so if you want a sequel go ahead, I would like to see how a sequel plays out

Please, make the next story, the baby would be a girl, half kalessh half Togruta, make story of her, also grievous and Shaak Ti

si as una secuela

Good, good, let the power of the fans flow through you...
DO IT!

yes, make a sequel...

As Chaos’s Will I would tell you to make a sequel

Yes please continue