| Reviews for Emotion |
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   LilithiaRW chapter 1 . 12/31/2013 Aw that was nice. The last line was perfect for the two of them. |
| kk9 chapter 1 . 5/16/2013 wonderful make a nother onw |
| Gryphaena chapter 1 . 12/18/2007 Hurrah! |
| Gwen Gamgee chapter 1 . 7/14/2007 This is done really well. It really describes how one would go from , friends to, well, more... or at least think about it. Very realistic. And I had never thought about that as a reason for Cyborg's love of machines. It's a very good theory. I like it. Gwen |
| ExiledfromAzerath chapter 1 . 5/5/2007 is this the end? So sweet, I hope they tell each other! CyRae 4ever! |
| Kimmy TurCha chapter 1 . 10/19/2006 short and cute, nice idea i liked it great work. Keep up the great work, hope to read more of you work soon. Much Love -TurCha |
| Sifu Soul chapter 1 . 8/20/2006 By Far the best Cy/Rae ficlet I've seen True, there aren't that many, but it definately rates as one of the top Oneshots overall as well. I really didn't think Cyborg got enough development in the show, and you did a great job of portraying him. You did a great job of keeping Raven in Character, which is hard to do. Great job. |
| cornelia1715 chapter 1 . 7/14/2006 oh...that's so sweet...I love this...Raven and Cyborg are my favorite pairing... |
| ChopStickGirl120 chapter 1 . 7/7/2006 LOVE LOVE LOVE! I LOVE IT! U AWESOME! |
| gammaraygus chapter 1 . 3/7/2006 Well done. I'm fairly new to the CY/Rae ship, but this was really good. |
| Animegoil chapter 1 . 3/4/2006 Cute _ Interesting reflections, and I liked the whole scenario, sweet, casual, really something very possible in teh titan tower. Great way of desribing things. |
| incense-whiskers chapter 1 . 3/4/2006 Loved how you got their emotions and feelings so clearly. :) |
| The Critique Golem chapter 1 . 2/8/2006 Hello! We have come to offer our services! A couple details should be brought to your attention. First, "Rear Window" was done in 1954, not the forties. It's also in color. A minor slip, but it jars the story. Your characterization is pretty good, and you bring some interesting points to Cyborg's character, but you could vary your sentence structure a little bit, give it a bit more zing. As it is, your diction is a little flat; don't be afraid to use more vibrant adjectives and verbs. Try to portray emotions with more depth by giving them more screen time; right now, it's a little minimal, and the few more physical details you give pop out incongruously. By all means, keep this story; we enjoyed it. Benedictions |
| T chapter 1 . 1/25/2006 nice. plez write moe fics. luved it. |
| Venra chapter 1 . 12/18/2005 Yes! You captured both characters wonderfully and you made it just like I would think their relationship would be like. Kudos. |
